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I personally want this pack to be an actually decent pack, not some random pack thrown out there nobody's going to bother with. Being an amazing pack, I'm not sure, but I still want it to be cool and fun. |
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Doing homework right now (apparently), and starting on All of the World. |
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Alright. Once I finish with my work (hopefully really soon), I'll get straight to it and give you a hugeass tear-up of your file.
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If you could email me a .txt file, that'd be really cool.
Send to trumaestro[at]hotmail[dot]com |
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SORRY TOO LATE */edit* Keep in mind if I state something for one part of the song that repeats, apply it to all of them. In addition, a lot of this is just personal opinion, so if you disagree with some of my suggestions, you don't need to take them. Blood For Justice m1- the 8th jumps that go to the guitar or w/e, play around with them because it's a little strange for me. dunno what to do, but if you can't improve it then leave it because it's big deal at all. m2- the 2nd 8th beat (the first 8th jump of the measure) has a 16th triplet (24ths) leading to the 2nd beat of the measure, but its not too audible so you can leave it be. m2 again- the 24ths starting from the 3rd beat are incorrect. assuming x = 24th and - = 24th rest, it goes like this xx-x-xx-xx-xx. it's a little awkward so play with the patterns a bit and you can go ahead and layer something in if you want to try that m4 and m6- third beats could be a hand m7- the jump on the 2nd beat actually starts on the 16th following that. the 3rd beat could also be a hand but that = jack and might disrupt flow and may not be fun so idk m8 9 10 whatever- try stepping the slide thingies no idea how theyll turn out though same area as above- since its a pretty intense area with few actual hits and stuff, try "intensifying" the steps to the beats or something m14- the jumptrill thing should be 3 16th jumps, a 16th arrow, then 7 16th jumps not 5 jumps single arrow 5 jumps again m15-21 or whatever- the percussion is not too dominating here; the bass is. try stepping that? m23-28- oh god this part could DEFINITELY have more jumps/hands to the heavy downbeats and accents coming from things besides from solely the percussion. try some holds to the guitar too m29-37 area and whereever it repeats- holds to the guitar would probably be better m38-some measure later area (too lazy lol)- try adding holds to everything thats an 8th beat long or longer than that (not 16ths for example) from the guitar. add hands too on louder beats. m38- pick-up to m39 you missed a 16th from the guitar m39- 8th beat between 3rd and 4th beat- check the sync on the guitar here. i changed it to 3 16ths and the 3rd beat was a jump, then a 24th right after that (pink arrow thing) and an 8th before the next measure m41- quad is no. also, the guitar syncing is actually a 12th note before the 3rd beat, 8th note after the 3rd beat, and another 12th right after the 4th. m42 4th beat- try a (26) jump instead of a (86) for PR purposes guitar solo place- bring out the guitar notes a little more (example you'll have a triple thingy when its 8ths on from the rhythm and a lone from the guitar- place a jump on the guitar there to bring it out or something) m62- 4th beat- guitar thing- starts on the 4th beat, 32nd right after that, then it's a 12th note after the 14th beat, and a 16th before the start of the next measure. check syncage like this where its like that. guitar solo area generally needs more work m123- should be 2 16th jumps from 16th note before the 3rd beat and on the 3rd beat (shift down a 16th value) m124- continue stepping the rhythm guitar 16ths here and place a jumptrill at the final beat also you did use copy&paste for a lot of the file right? it annoys me a bit so change up some patterns i missed some stuff out of laziness btw *edit 2* starting on judging the newer files tomorrow. *edit 3* hey dore is it actually pronouced door not dore because i always viewed it that way because of the word dore in japanese :| |
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trumaestro i havent had a chance to get an in-depth review of your file but i guess npv made one. can't say how accurate it is though hehe
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Yeah it's dore as in commodore.
EDIT Now that I think of it I always pronounced your named omgpitzpov so I guess we're even. |
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i'd still say go ahead and make an in-depth review yourself since most of my reviews and judging reeks of bias and junk so yeah Quote:
skcwbtgrobhwld (9:30:57 PM): EDIT Now that I think of it I always pronounced your named omgpitzpov so I guess we're even. TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:08 PM): rofl TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:20 PM): nono TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:21 PM): no TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:22 PM): rofl TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:27 PM): rofl TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:28 PM): hard TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:30 PM): hard TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:30 PM): rofl TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:37 PM): hard rofling |
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I have trouble making a 9 letter name 7 syllables long so I kinda condensed it rofl
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yeah if i were to make a long in-depth review dondon style it would take a little while. although i think he has good guidelines to make his file better.
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WOW... Sorry guys... I haven't been at home much for the past few days... I'll get the batch notes for batch 2 done, and get to work on all of these files...
EDIT: Yeah... the batches are REALLY short... Could we PLEASE make them like a week long or something? this 3 or 4 day thing is really screwing me up... EDIT2: Dicks is gay and that marathon song is boring as hell... I'll post my batch notes tomorrow probably, if I have time to play the rest of the songs... |
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why make batches? just judge the files as they're submitted
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I still have some stuff to do to it. I can send it maybe tonight, if kommisar agrees to this. It is/will be by far the best file I have ever made. |
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sure ill look at it after the fixes. this file is fun and has potential so i'll really look into it
ps canadian talent hehe |
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Rf is down :-(
P.S. All of the World is awesome YESSS |
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I sent in Hit It Like Thunder =D
Go judge plz |
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everything's judged
nothing's accepted two are really close to being accepted though hi dore hi enr |
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