01-27-2016, 06:20 PM | #1 |
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2015 July/August Set 2 (Complete)
Ashes to Ashes - UNKNOWN
d e a t h p i a n o 'for four pianos' v2 - Xi Dragonsbane - Lorenguard Pinkie Pie Loves Sugar - Foozogz
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01-29-2016, 07:27 PM | #2 |
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Re: 2015 July/August Set 2
Ashes to Ashes has been rejected for being an incomplete file. Resubmissions for this file will not be allowed for this period.
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01-29-2016, 08:05 PM | #3 |
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Re: 2015 July/August Set 2
Ashes to Ashes 0/10 incomplete file
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Re: 2015 July/August Set 2
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02-2-2016, 01:43 PM | #5 |
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Re: 2015 July/August Set 2
Your Pinky Pie review has been removed, as stated do not be rude in your reviews. We have inexperienced steppers that try their best and are learning. Making comments like those are not constructive.
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02-11-2016, 08:40 PM | #6 |
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07-22-2016, 02:45 PM | #7 |
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Re: 2015 July/August Set 2
i just lost my entire post as i was typing this so i'll try to remember what went into it (editing locally this time)
Ashes to Ashes: 0/10 (incomplete as noted above) - if you're only going to step so much of a song, be sure to cut the rest Last edited by inDheart; 07-22-2016 at 03:15 PM.. |
08-1-2016, 12:27 AM | #8 |
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Re: 2015 July/August Set 2
I am clueless as to whether I am allowed to post here or not but if I'm not just delete this :P.
I would like to thank all my judges for rating my lets be honest pretty bad file. It's my first attempt and it was a bad file, all my ratings were fair and I will use them when I try this again. It was a spam fest of me trying to make a extremely difficult file, and trying to get up on difficulty. It was probably a mistake to try such a hard fast song as my first file so I might come back on it later or right away if I get impatient. But again I appreciate every single one of your ratings (I don't know who made a "rude" comment but thank you too) and I would love to try and make a file again. If I am not allowed to post here just delete it and please private message me saying you deleted it. But again thank you, and I will be back, hopefully with a better file. |
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09-7-2016, 09:00 AM | #10 |
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Re: 2015 July/August Set 2
TC_Halogen finished the primary judge task for July/August 2015 Set 2. The notes can be seen below; this thread is being moved over to Completed Sets and the results/notes will be updated in the July/August 2015 thread. This batch period is now complete.
[0/10] Ashes to Ashes {UNKNOWN} (M0nkeyz) - incomplete file (see: http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...60&postcount=2); notes to be provided upon request one the file is entirely completed or fixed to be a completed submission Song artist not listed properly in SM file, which is grounds for rejection; ensure that proper metadata exists within the .sm file [8/10] d e a t h p i a n o 'for four pianos' v2 {Xi} (hi19hi19) - 13.328: I will forever make notes on people who accommodate for ascending scales as never-ending rolls aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa - 27.798/etc: while the 16ths do exist, the 12th notes are the prominent piano and it might be more sensible to create some light polyrhythms to give that slightly 'bouncier' feel - 38.387: make the first note out of the trill the same as the trill to keep PR continuity - 48.350: this particular mini-stream stands out to me because a lot of the notes are ambiguous to which piano are being followed as opposed to later instances (53.468 is ok) - 68.821 to 77.291: don't agree with the piano playing 16ths to be followed, but the structure is sensible and has no errors - 100.944: if you're going for harder piano chords, this one, among others: (106.062 [may be biproduct of layering], 108.709) should be removed - 102.356: anchor to 3 - 118.591: anchor to 3 - 142.206: seems a bit erroneous; hard to discern the accent - 145.735: see 48.350 - 152.441: check PR on chord as this one actually goes down - that last trill is horribly hard to time lmfao - solid chart; don't necessarily agree with the interpretation in spots but it does work [7.5/10] Dragonsbane {Lorenguard} (hi19hi19) - PR in intro could be improved a bit, particularly with string accenting and occasional lower guitar notes - 92.563: snare being a triple is a bit glaring compared to the 8th before and after it which still have melodic components that could be leveraged in a way that keeps consistent layering - 112.616: if 112.774 is a jump presumably for the lower guitar, then this one should be as well - 145.932/(etc): jumps for snares - 153.195: see 92.563 - 173.248: see 112.616 - 216.985: first two jumps could be realigned to better improve PR for the 12th notes - 235.368: some slight patterning work can help improve PR from here to 237.304 (see: http://puu.sh/r1uu0/9122e5e933.png); same with 241.175 - 251.658: numerous snares with no jumps - 317.304: add a grace note for the guitar note - 331.307: remove jump, it stands out a bit strangely as there's numerous other snares - 401.728: snares, etc - 431.964: missing note for a tom hit here - 436.464: given the attention to vocals, I feel like a single note should be placed here - file's definitely done with the intent of being a bit more old-school with the classic, long index-friendly streaming - stream patterns were a little dull after a while - this could be alleviated by keeping index-friendliness while manipulating patterns to still have some accenting power - overall, not too bad but could use a bit more polishing. [1/10] Pinkie Pie Loves Sugar {Foozogz} (manicpies898) - follows submission guidelines, and therefore is ineligible for a 0 rating - chart is unfortunately done using record mode, quantized to 24th notes and as a result, does not have a coherent structure or proper rhythms - consider reading some guides on simfiling to actually make a chart for this!
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