Go Back   Flash Flash Revolution: Community Forums > Life and Arts > Writing and Literature

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 04-18-2009, 11:56 PM   #1
Erothyme
FFR Player
 
Erothyme's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: VA
Age: 29
Posts: 2,033
Send a message via AIM to Erothyme Send a message via MSN to Erothyme Send a message via Skype™ to Erothyme
Default I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

Goodbye, dry brush,
Crumbling at a touch,
Now brittle, once lush,
But just briefly such.
Now flaming to fly
And unite with the sky,
You're no different from I,
No, not very much.

You never will die,
You never were born,
We both keep alive
As you're keeping me warm.
You flow through my future,
Impacting my path,
And my past flows right into
Your ash aftermath.

Goodbye, dry brush.
Making habit of change,
You partake in the rush
Of returning to flame,
Combusting to rise
And to light up my eyes,
You confine your demise
To mere virtue of name.

With no resistance
And with no fear,
Released, swirling into
The vast atmosphere,
The grand stream unbroken,
Ever-shifting form,
Whispers with white smoke
While it's keeping me warm,

Its essence soft-spoken
Through fiery storm.

Last edited by Erothyme; 04-19-2009 at 12:23 AM..
Erothyme is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 12:31 AM   #2
Dorby
First of all, yes
FFR Veteran
 
Dorby's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Age: 30
Posts: 782
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

ok so you lit a brush on fire
__________________
OSRS Runescape - okcomputer89
League of Legends - Imaginary Deity
XBL - Imaginary Deity

Quote:
Originally Posted by Phynx View Post
And so it was, with this thread that, in 2014 Robertsona will be placed in history via the Legendary Thread section. He will be respected as a self-proclaimed master of TGB. A feat so uncared for and ignored that he himself committed suicide in early 2013.
Dorby is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 12:46 AM   #3
Erothyme
FFR Player
 
Erothyme's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: VA
Age: 29
Posts: 2,033
Send a message via AIM to Erothyme Send a message via MSN to Erothyme Send a message via Skype™ to Erothyme
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

I would hope someone with a psilocybe mushroom avatar would be more thoughtful.

Apparently there are exceptions.
Erothyme is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 01:00 AM   #4
Dr Tran
Banned
 
Join Date: Aug 2008
Posts: 1,104
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

i enjoyed reading it
Dr Tran is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 01:01 AM   #5
Erothyme
FFR Player
 
Erothyme's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: VA
Age: 29
Posts: 2,033
Send a message via AIM to Erothyme Send a message via MSN to Erothyme Send a message via Skype™ to Erothyme
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

Good to hear.
Erothyme is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 01:02 AM   #6
NFD
FFR Player
 
NFD's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: I see us on a beach down in, Mexico
Age: 27
Posts: 4,570
Send a message via Skype™ to NFD
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

At least you didn't plagiarize.

Reminded me of Robert Frost.
__________________
NFD is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 01:24 AM   #7
Tokzic
FFR Player
 
Tokzic's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2005
Location: TGB
Age: 30
Posts: 7,109
Send a message via AIM to Tokzic
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dorby View Post
ok so you lit a brush on fire
Brush can also mean wood, dumbass.

Also, ****ing brilliant as always.
__________________

Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what
Tokzic is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 01:25 AM   #8
Dorby
First of all, yes
FFR Veteran
 
Dorby's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Age: 30
Posts: 782
Post Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tokzic View Post
Brush can also mean wood, dumbass.
ok... you can still light wood on fire ...
__________________
OSRS Runescape - okcomputer89
League of Legends - Imaginary Deity
XBL - Imaginary Deity

Quote:
Originally Posted by Phynx View Post
And so it was, with this thread that, in 2014 Robertsona will be placed in history via the Legendary Thread section. He will be respected as a self-proclaimed master of TGB. A feat so uncared for and ignored that he himself committed suicide in early 2013.
Dorby is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 01:26 AM   #9
Erothyme
FFR Player
 
Erothyme's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: VA
Age: 29
Posts: 2,033
Send a message via AIM to Erothyme Send a message via MSN to Erothyme Send a message via Skype™ to Erothyme
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

I hope to god you're drunk or something.
Erothyme is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 01:30 AM   #10
Dorby
First of all, yes
FFR Veteran
 
Dorby's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Age: 30
Posts: 782
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

How did you know that when I get drunk I log into FFR and read random poems in the forum?
__________________
OSRS Runescape - okcomputer89
League of Legends - Imaginary Deity
XBL - Imaginary Deity

Quote:
Originally Posted by Phynx View Post
And so it was, with this thread that, in 2014 Robertsona will be placed in history via the Legendary Thread section. He will be respected as a self-proclaimed master of TGB. A feat so uncared for and ignored that he himself committed suicide in early 2013.
Dorby is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 01:37 AM   #11
Erothyme
FFR Player
 
Erothyme's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: VA
Age: 29
Posts: 2,033
Send a message via AIM to Erothyme Send a message via MSN to Erothyme Send a message via Skype™ to Erothyme
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

I've got a pretty well-developed intuition.
Erothyme is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 01:44 AM   #12
Dorby
First of all, yes
FFR Veteran
 
Dorby's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Age: 30
Posts: 782
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

Obviously not. Oh yeah and your sig looks like ****.
__________________
OSRS Runescape - okcomputer89
League of Legends - Imaginary Deity
XBL - Imaginary Deity

Quote:
Originally Posted by Phynx View Post
And so it was, with this thread that, in 2014 Robertsona will be placed in history via the Legendary Thread section. He will be respected as a self-proclaimed master of TGB. A feat so uncared for and ignored that he himself committed suicide in early 2013.
Dorby is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 01:51 AM   #13
NFD
FFR Player
 
NFD's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: I see us on a beach down in, Mexico
Age: 27
Posts: 4,570
Send a message via Skype™ to NFD
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

Your sig makes you a hypocrite, so blegh.
__________________
NFD is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 01:51 AM   #14
Erothyme
FFR Player
 
Erothyme's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: VA
Age: 29
Posts: 2,033
Send a message via AIM to Erothyme Send a message via MSN to Erothyme Send a message via Skype™ to Erothyme
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

I don't see the resemblance between my signature and four asterisks, but I will take your word for it, as you are obviously incredibly wise.
Erothyme is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 03:41 AM   #15
Triplex72
CUSTOMIZED
FFR Simfile Author
 
Triplex72's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Your Imagination
Posts: 969
Send a message via AIM to Triplex72 Send a message via MSN to Triplex72
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

tl;dr
__________________
connect 216.246.109.6:27015

Triplex72 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 05:32 AM   #16
phe0nixblade
Praise the sun mofo
FFR Veteran
 
phe0nixblade's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Lordran
Age: 28
Posts: 4,158
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

I love this Erothyme guy, smart, and cocky. That's hardcore.
And as tokzic said, brilliant
__________________
phe0nixblade is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 07:23 AM   #17
Bolth mannn
FFR Veteran
FFR Veteran
 
Bolth mannn's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2008
Age: 25
Posts: 2,092
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

lol when I read the title I thought it said something along the lines of 'i was set on fire by a notebook tonight'

i think my brains reading things wrong lol, night.
__________________
Wow I'm old
Bolth mannn is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 10:04 AM   #18
virus003
FFR Veteran
FFR Veteran
 
virus003's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Huntington Beach, CA
Age: 26
Posts: 1,777
Send a message via AIM to virus003
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dorby View Post
Obviously not. Oh yeah and your sig looks like ****.
Think about your sig for a second.
__________________

Quote:
Originally Posted by XUioX View Post
too hard and too long.. the rest of it was easy though.
Quote:
Originally Posted by roundb0x View Post
i still have photos of my dad dickfeeding me when i was like 5
Quote:
Originally Posted by who_cares973 View Post
stop back seat modding its annoying
virus003 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 11:29 AM   #19
Erothyme
FFR Player
 
Erothyme's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: VA
Age: 29
Posts: 2,033
Send a message via AIM to Erothyme Send a message via MSN to Erothyme Send a message via Skype™ to Erothyme
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Triplex72 View Post
tl;dr
Attention span of a fruit fly on heroin.
Erothyme is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 11:34 AM   #20
NFD
FFR Player
 
NFD's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: I see us on a beach down in, Mexico
Age: 27
Posts: 4,570
Send a message via Skype™ to NFD
Default Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

Hello darkness, my old friend,
Ive come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.
__________________
NFD is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump



All times are GMT -5. The time now is 03:21 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.1
Copyright ©2000 - 2020, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Copyright FlashFlashRevolution