Old 04-12-2009, 07:17 PM   #21
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Die stupid bitch Die.
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Old 04-12-2009, 08:29 PM   #22
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For reference, the lyrics to Degenerates, by Scary Kids Scaring Kids:

Do you think you're made of gold?
Invincible?
You think you can handle it?
You will learn from this.

I'm telling you friend
this is something worth fighting for.
Does it not seem contradicting
to sit back and watch them take more?
Caught like a deer in their headlights, you're stuck now.
You're bound by your fears
I suggest you break free or
you'll forever be damned here.

We are merely degenerates waiting for you.

They keep marching on
spilling blood like savages.
Taking lives while your cigarette burns, burns.

You can't tell me my friend
that that wasn't worth dying for.
gave it all and received nothing
may as well have let them take more.
Dig deep find the courage to speak
are you really still bound by your fear?
This is all just a dream now
you can't speak and you're damned here.

We are merely degenerates waiting for you.

They keep marching on
spilling blood like savages.
Taking lives while your cigarette burns, burns.

This is our fight for freedom
this is our way of saying
this is our day.

We've been waiting for this one day all our lives
This nothing short of predictable.
Stop holding your head down
Give it up!
get a hold of yourself now.
Or give it up!
Your like a deer in the headlights,
You've given up!
To save your life.

We've been waiting, yeah waiting all our lives
This nothing short of predictable.
Stop holding your head down
Give it up!
get a hold of yourself now.
Or give it up!
Your like a deer in the headlights,
You've given up!
To save your life.
Find the will to save your life!
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Old 04-12-2009, 09:21 PM   #23
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I've never even heard that song and I called it.
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Old 04-13-2009, 11:03 AM   #24
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Is this the part where she disappears and never returns, the part where she FUCKING DELETES EVERYTHING, or the part where she continues to deny it?
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Old 04-13-2009, 10:01 PM   #25
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Hopefully the first one but that is most unlikely.

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Is this the part where she disappears and never returns, the part where she FUCKING DELETES EVERYTHING, or the part where she continues to deny it?
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Old 04-13-2009, 10:30 PM   #26
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She might make a SUPER TALENTED alt account

lol jk
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why not plagiarize something good?
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Old 04-14-2009, 03:57 PM   #28
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hey kitkat i just thought of what to call your poem

why don't you call it "degenerates by scary kids scaring kids"
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Old 04-14-2009, 06:47 PM   #29
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You should do what that fat woman did and jump into a polar bear pit. I mean sounds fun right.
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Old 04-15-2009, 08:52 AM   #30
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Ok, I'm gettingsick of you people leaving comments on my profile. Look, I'm sorry. That is the first time I've ever done that, I just thougt it was neat, and a good mix of words. It's the first and last time I will do that.
Now please stop pestering me!
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Old 04-15-2009, 09:27 AM   #31
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fail to the tastic

epic ninja turtles 3 poetry. (live action in japan w00t)
woah oh oh aoh aoh aoh aaaaah ooohhh oohhh
woah oh oh aoh aoh aoh aaaaah ooohhh ahhhh
(pretty much the whole ending song, it's cool tho lol)
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i forgot when i was told this, but my teacher said that some poets are too lazy to title their poem so they usually stick with the first line in the poem. i suggest that if your pooped.
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Old 04-15-2009, 02:26 PM   #33
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name it dicks
I totally agree with him.
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Old 04-15-2009, 02:30 PM   #34
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It's even funnier that Degenerates is a song on FFR
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Look, this arguement can go on for forever and a day. I would appreciate it if it could just be dropped. This is my work I'm sorry if everyone else would like to think other wise.
Of course you're going to get called out when you outright lied and tried to claim someone else's work as your own. Plagiarism is a really lowlife thing to do and you went right ahead and tried to tell everyone you did it.

People like you are the trash of literature. Plagiarists never get anywhere because if they ever get a decent amount of exposure for their stolen work, they inevitably get called out and have any chance at a career ruined.

You'd better expect backlash when you try to do something so scummy.
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Old 04-15-2009, 05:40 PM   #36
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i forgot when i was told this, but my teacher said that some poets are too lazy to title their poem so they usually stick with the first line in the poem. i suggest that if your pooped.
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Every time I think of this thread, I leave a comment on kitkat's wall. I recommend the rest of you do the same thing.
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Uh, plagiarism does not fly here. Even if you don't consider what you did to be plagiarism, it still is. A corn cob is still a corn cob, even if some moron call it an original poem.
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