THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH

[Wayward Vagabond]

Sweet I'm going to take this time to work on files that aren't el gato volador

[dadcop2]

Originally Posted by MinaciousGrace

also im not dead but lofty is and i'm going to use that as an excuse to take a break from pack work and do other stuff

afaik the stuff that still needs reviews are files from fanta, shxfted and alexmandi

if you sent me something and your name isnt on that list then assume i forgot about it and send me an appropriately frustrated and/or hostile reminder

i think you said earlier you were gonna give lofty my file for a review
oh boy am i angry grr

[choof]

bump
would you take a 340bpm light js chart

[Travis_Flesher]

[MinaciousGrace]

Originally Posted by choof

bump
would you take a 340bpm light js chart

is it a restep of the others

[MinaciousGrace]

Originally Posted by dadcop2

i think you said earlier you were gonna give lofty my file for a review
oh boy am i angry grr

lofty mia like 3 weeks finishing his last semester

dropped some files from the pool that have found more appropriate packs

[choof]

Originally Posted by MinaciousGrace

is it a restep of the others

no its about 2 minutes of flashcore
but not atomhead

[Coolboyrulez0]

:^)

[choof]

sent two charts

[Soul Evans]

Life hit me hard recently so i couldn't do anything about that revision i was gonna send, also that different chart i would have sent too, so i was wondering if you'd still accept that or what the current state of this pack gonna be in.

[MinaciousGrace]

you all have like 4 months at minimum

pack work on my end is on hiatus atm and lofty is real lifing

[choof]

I have the perfect thing to chart and I'm totally doing it to fuck with you

[Leo137]

i'm still working for this!

[Arntonach]

Did you still want City of Revelry? I know it's not like the rest of the simfiles in the pack, so if you don't want it, I can hold onto it.

[MinaciousGrace]

i had some further comments which i'm not sure if you saw

or you saw and i forgot idk

>>>>>>
City of Revelry (Arntonach) - This looks/feels a lot better. Both the buildup and climax are significantly improved. I have a couple of small comments mostly from a playing perspective (little fiddly things that I think should be fixed after playing a file a bunch of times). If you want I can make proposed fixes on my own and send them to you instead, but in case you want to look and do/not do them yourself:

111.75s- 16th splithand jumps here might be more appropriate, it feels a little strange to start a section where 48ths are otherwise exclusively owned by the sax with this burst going to the drums (especially when the sax kicks in half a second later)

122.5s- This buildup feels a little weird after the layering gets dropped out, I don't think the climax is so difficult that this is necessary anymore, and I would put it back. Perhaps drop the jump on the last 16th if it makes things too hard.

124.25s- I'm kind of half and half on this but I think it would play better to follow the fade out of the sax with a progression (32nds->24ths->16ths, 24ths->16ths?) rather than immediately moving to 16ths. This is something that I might revise and playtest a half dozen times before I thought I got it right.

e: but to answer your question yes i do want it

[Arntonach]

i saw it and fixed it now i sent it now your turn to saw it

[MinaciousGrace]

ok im done being ded

lofty is still mia but you know what we'll carry on

expect the review backlog to be finished up by midweek and for any issues that i think are pressing on other files to be addressed

if you have something you've been working on over time now is probably the best time to wrap up a draft and get it sent

[Buta-san]

I might give up on this

https://youtu.be/Q3Yc3HhSl1Q?t=18s

it was my only non weeb submission too :/

[MinaciousGrace]

no dont give up!!!!
or send me weeb stuff from u its ok

[MinaciousGrace]

City of Revelry (Antronach) - :OK_Mine:. Changes play out well, the only thing that's a little iffy for me is the fast anchor jack into the hand at 114. I'll let you know if I think it should be changed.

Cuatro Babys (Leo137) - Pretty cool song/file overall, though it does drag on a bit. I think a little more pattern flavor in the latter half would go a long way here. There are a lot of non-static anchors -> jacks like at 38.55 on 3 and 41.12 on 2. Personally I think a fast anchor into a slow jack is much more awkward than a slow anchor into a fast jack, and the trickiness of alternating between those two different situations repeatedly adds up a lot. I think it's a lot of the technical charm of the file, so I wouldn't completely gut them, but I do think they constitute "too much" (though this might get fixed incidentally with more pattern variation in the latter half).

Some specific comments
77.9 - suuuuper awkward
105.1 - the right hand anchor sequence that starts here is pretty out of this world

I don't think the file particularly needs a cut before the last chorus but you might do that if you are drawing blanks on pattern variety.

YODELLING (Choof) - I like the pattern arrangement everywhere in this file except for the 64th rolls. I don't like how they end in a 64th minijack, and I don't like how the first is an ascending that starts on a 4, and the other mirrored. Imo the rolls are too technically demanding to be anything other than frustrating given the rest of the file. I'd like to see the minijack changed to a 32nd at minimum.

Kamikaze (Choof) - no.

Get Got (lemonguy) - See cuatro babys. Drags on a bit. I'm ok with accepting it in full but there has to be more pattern variety.