new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes

**sakura080789** · 05-19-2008, 12:10 AM

Look we made this song and we need feedback seriously please honest feed back we want to know if you like it or if you hate it and you can step it if you want but we need feed back absolute honest feedback...

here is the link to the song

http://files.filefront.com/EntranceM.../fileinfo.html

retard_gamer · 06-3-2008, 12:01 PM

i didnt here anyone sing. im totally lost lmao. i like it but i rarely step anything over 2:15 so im not gonna. but it was good. how did you make it?

**sleeplessdragn** · 06-3-2008, 08:44 PM

Very creative! Though it does sound like an assortment of loops strung together, mostly because there doesn't sound like there is any obvious mixing going on, or any sort of obvious musical theme development that I could recognize.

Doctor_Attitude · 06-3-2008, 10:32 PM

It's got some good mixing in it, the first real drums that come in seem awkwardly placed... you have a lot of creative effects on the synths lines, but it almost seems like there is too much and the tune itself loses a lot of it's drive.

It also got a bit boring because of how much the song changed. You didn't seem to really stick to one idea for very long which makes it hard to really sit back and groove to.

It seems like the entire song changes it every two measures, maybe if try it so it there is a real change every 4 measures? I think the two measures really doesn't let the song settle for very long.

As sleepless dragon says it sounds like a bunch of loops strung together, I think that's why.

It's also hurt by not have a main melody of any sort.

Over all not bad, though.

**sakura080789** · 12-3-2008, 01:05 PM

hmm thanks ppl and well i use something called Magix Music Maker
ps Major Bump lmao

DoctorSerpentine · 12-3-2008, 07:26 PM

The problem I see when people use GarageBand or Magix is that they use sort of "random" loops. The song feels good, but
1. You didn't create it really.
2. It doesn't have a "theme" or "feel" and keeps changing around.

**sakura080789** · 12-5-2008, 10:53 AM

hmm that was our bands first song lol but i have more which keep more on one beat
my first album is out as well
here is the link
http://files.filefront.com/The+Bite+.../fileinfo.html

05-19-2008, 12:10 AM	#1
sakura080789 Rapture Universe Join Date: Feb 2007 Age: 34 Posts: 1,749	new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes Look we made this song and we need feedback seriously please honest feed back we want to know if you like it or if you hate it and you can step it if you want but we need feed back absolute honest feedback... here is the link to the song http://files.filefront.com/EntranceM.../fileinfo.html __________________

06-3-2008, 12:01 PM	#2
retard_gamer FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: fl Age: 32 Posts: 138	Re: new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes i didnt here anyone sing. im totally lost lmao. i like it but i rarely step anything over 2:15 so im not gonna. but it was good. how did you make it?

06-3-2008, 08:44 PM	#3
sleeplessdragn ~Bang that beat Harder~ Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 2,321	Re: new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes Very creative! Though it does sound like an assortment of loops strung together, mostly because there doesn't sound like there is any obvious mixing going on, or any sort of obvious musical theme development that I could recognize. __________________

06-3-2008, 10:32 PM	#4
Doctor_Attitude FFR Player Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 47	Re: new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes It's got some good mixing in it, the first real drums that come in seem awkwardly placed... you have a lot of creative effects on the synths lines, but it almost seems like there is too much and the tune itself loses a lot of it's drive. It also got a bit boring because of how much the song changed. You didn't seem to really stick to one idea for very long which makes it hard to really sit back and groove to. It seems like the entire song changes it every two measures, maybe if try it so it there is a real change every 4 measures? I think the two measures really doesn't let the song settle for very long. As sleepless dragon says it sounds like a bunch of loops strung together, I think that's why. It's also hurt by not have a main melody of any sort. Over all not bad, though.

12-3-2008, 01:05 PM	#5
sakura080789 Rapture Universe Join Date: Feb 2007 Age: 34 Posts: 1,749	Re: new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes hmm thanks ppl and well i use something called Magix Music Maker ps Major Bump lmao __________________

12-3-2008, 07:26 PM	#6
DoctorSerpentine Banned Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 412	Re: new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes The problem I see when people use GarageBand or Magix is that they use sort of "random" loops. The song feels good, but 1. You didn't create it really. 2. It doesn't have a "theme" or "feel" and keeps changing around.

12-5-2008, 10:53 AM	#7
sakura080789 Rapture Universe Join Date: Feb 2007 Age: 34 Posts: 1,749	Re: new song 3ntrance by Sakura080789 and Xerxes hmm that was our bands first song lol but i have more which keep more on one beat my first album is out as well here is the link http://files.filefront.com/The+Bite+.../fileinfo.html __________________

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