I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight.

Erothyme · 04-18-2009, 11:56 PM

Goodbye, dry brush,
Crumbling at a touch,
Now brittle, once lush,
But just briefly such.
Now flaming to fly
And unite with the sky,
You're no different from I,
No, not very much.

You never will die,
You never were born,
We both keep alive
As you're keeping me warm.
You flow through my future,
Impacting my path,
And my past flows right into
Your ash aftermath.

Goodbye, dry brush.
Making habit of change,
You partake in the rush
Of returning to flame,
Combusting to rise
And to light up my eyes,
You confine your demise
To mere virtue of name.

With no resistance
And with no fear,
Released, swirling into
The vast atmosphere,
The grand stream unbroken,
Ever-shifting form,
Whispers with white smoke
While it's keeping me warm,

Its essence soft-spoken
Through fiery storm.

**Dorby** · 04-19-2009, 12:31 AM

ok so you lit a brush on fire

Erothyme · 04-19-2009, 12:46 AM

I would hope someone with a psilocybe mushroom avatar would be more thoughtful.

Apparently there are exceptions.

Dr Tran · 04-19-2009, 01:00 AM

i enjoyed reading it

Erothyme · 04-19-2009, 01:01 AM

Good to hear.

NFD · 04-19-2009, 01:02 AM

At least you didn't plagiarize.

Reminded me of Robert Frost.

Tokzic · 04-19-2009, 01:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dorby

ok so you lit a brush on fire

Brush can also mean wood, dumbass.

Also, ****ing brilliant as always.

**Dorby** · 04-19-2009, 01:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tokzic

Brush can also mean wood, dumbass.

ok... you can still light wood on fire ...

Erothyme · 04-19-2009, 01:26 AM

I hope to god you're drunk or something.

**Dorby** · 04-19-2009, 01:30 AM

How did you know that when I get drunk I log into FFR and read random poems in the forum?

Erothyme · 04-19-2009, 01:37 AM

I've got a pretty well-developed intuition.

**Dorby** · 04-19-2009, 01:44 AM

Obviously not. Oh yeah and your sig looks like ****.

NFD · 04-19-2009, 01:51 AM

Your sig makes you a hypocrite, so blegh.

Erothyme · 04-19-2009, 01:51 AM

I don't see the resemblance between my signature and four asterisks, but I will take your word for it, as you are obviously incredibly wise.

Triplex72 · 04-19-2009, 03:41 AM

tl;dr

**phe0nixblade** · 04-19-2009, 05:32 AM

I love this Erothyme guy, smart, and cocky. That's hardcore.
And as tokzic said, brilliant

**Bolth mannn** · 04-19-2009, 07:23 AM

lol when I read the title I thought it said something along the lines of 'i was set on fire by a notebook tonight'

i think my brains reading things wrong lol, night.

**virus003** · 04-19-2009, 10:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dorby

Obviously not. Oh yeah and your sig looks like ****.

Think about your sig for a second.

Erothyme · 04-19-2009, 11:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Triplex72

tl;dr

Attention span of a fruit fly on heroin.

NFD · 04-19-2009, 11:34 AM

Hello darkness, my old friend,
Ive come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.

04-18-2009, 11:56 PM	#1
Erothyme FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: VA Age: 33 Posts: 2,033	I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight. Goodbye, dry brush, Crumbling at a touch, Now brittle, once lush, But just briefly such. Now flaming to fly And unite with the sky, You're no different from I, No, not very much. You never will die, You never were born, We both keep alive As you're keeping me warm. You flow through my future, Impacting my path, And my past flows right into Your ash aftermath. Goodbye, dry brush. Making habit of change, You partake in the rush Of returning to flame, Combusting to rise And to light up my eyes, You confine your demise To mere virtue of name. With no resistance And with no fear, Released, swirling into The vast atmosphere, The grand stream unbroken, Ever-shifting form, Whispers with white smoke While it's keeping me warm, Its essence soft-spoken Through fiery storm. __________________ erothyme.net (Purchase my album!) - Rithum - last.fm - discogs - ACIDplanet - Myspace - Facebook Last edited by Erothyme; 04-19-2009 at 12:23 AM..

04-19-2009, 12:46 AM	#3
Erothyme FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: VA Age: 33 Posts: 2,033	Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight. I would hope someone with a psilocybe mushroom avatar would be more thoughtful. Apparently there are exceptions. __________________ erothyme.net (Purchase my album!) - Rithum - last.fm - discogs - ACIDplanet - Myspace - Facebook

04-19-2009, 01:00 AM	#4
Dr Tran Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 1,134	Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight. i enjoyed reading it

04-19-2009, 01:01 AM	#5
Erothyme FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: VA Age: 33 Posts: 2,033	Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight. Good to hear. __________________ erothyme.net (Purchase my album!) - Rithum - last.fm - discogs - ACIDplanet - Myspace - Facebook

04-19-2009, 01:02 AM	#6
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04-19-2009, 01:26 AM	#9
Erothyme FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: VA Age: 33 Posts: 2,033	Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight. I hope to god you're drunk or something. __________________ erothyme.net (Purchase my album!) - Rithum - last.fm - discogs - ACIDplanet - Myspace - Facebook

04-19-2009, 01:37 AM	#11
Erothyme FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: VA Age: 33 Posts: 2,033	Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight. I've got a pretty well-developed intuition. __________________ erothyme.net (Purchase my album!) - Rithum - last.fm - discogs - ACIDplanet - Myspace - Facebook

04-19-2009, 01:51 AM	#13
NFD FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: I see us on a beach down in, Mexico Age: 30 Posts: 4,715	Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight. Your sig makes you a hypocrite, so blegh. __________________

04-19-2009, 03:41 AM	#15
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04-19-2009, 05:32 AM	#16
phe0nixblade Praise the sun mofo Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Lordran Age: 32 Posts: 4,281	Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight. I love this Erothyme guy, smart, and cocky. That's hardcore. And as tokzic said, brilliant __________________

04-19-2009, 07:23 AM	#17
Bolth mannn FFR Veteran Join Date: Aug 2008 Age: 29 Posts: 2,228	Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight. lol when I read the title I thought it said something along the lines of 'i was set on fire by a notebook tonight' i think my brains reading things wrong lol, night. __________________

04-19-2009, 11:34 AM	#20
NFD FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: I see us on a beach down in, Mexico Age: 30 Posts: 4,715	Re: I sat by a fire with a notebook tonight. Hello darkness, my old friend, Ive come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. __________________

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