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Moonlight-a poem by me =)
i hated it, so i removed it from forums
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09-18-2006, 06:01 PM
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Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)
I'm guessing you write alot of poems. I'm not much of a poem person, but that was pretty good.
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09-18-2006, 06:04 PM
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Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)
Yes, I have been writing poetry since around 5 or 6 years old. I think poems are the best form of writing because it allows you to use very few words but emphasizes meaning and paints vivid pictures in the readers mind.
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09-18-2006, 06:11 PM
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Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)
whoa!! that was absolutey beautiful i loved it i write poems but not as good as that EVER lol keep writing never stop you are soo freakin good at it im jealous lol
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09-18-2006, 06:19 PM
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Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)
Thats a very generous compliment. Thank you.
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09-18-2006, 07:01 PM
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Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)
i liked it but i got a lil confused in the begenning for the part where u turn into stone but then i got it later, i dont read or write much poetry that isnt love so ild say it was good seeing as how i got thro the whole thing. give ur self a pat on the back (not literlay unless u wanna)
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Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)
Wow, the forums down here are pretty empty. I think it should be advertised or something. I almost would have never found it.
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09-20-2006, 05:56 PM
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Re: Moonlight-a poem by me =)
Wow, no more comments? Bummer....
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