David Guetta - The World is Mine (Remix)

[DJAirWave]

Made this song a couple weeks ago. This is the first remix I've ever done and still the only one I've ever done lol.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7201638

[Cyanite]

Piano is a bit loud, doesn't really blend into the track as well as everything else does, especially in the intro.

My only real complaint is the song's form.. you don't really go anywhere or introduce anything drastically different with the song to keep my attention through the whole track, though since it was so short, that wasn't too bad of a problem. What's there is good, but I think you could have added something more to make the song a bit more interesting further along.

Good track either way.

[DJAirWave]

Originally Posted by Cyanite

Piano is a bit loud, doesn't really blend into the track as well as everything else does, especially in the intro.

My only real complaint is the song's form.. you don't really go anywhere or introduce anything drastically different with the song to keep my attention through the whole track, though since it was so short, that wasn't too bad of a problem. What's there is good, but I think you could have added something more to make the song a bit more interesting further along.

Good track either way.

Everytime I upload a song online, there will always be a refined version of it.

Edit: Obviously from saying this is my first and only remix, you can see that I'm the kind of person who writes my own work. I'm very new to using somone else's music and transferring it to my own material. I like originality in my music, which is why I did not use any original chords, only the vocals.