My First Song

[NumiGamer]

Just what the title says. I want feedback if possible. I wanna know what I did right and wrong. It's an attempt at a DnB track.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1F0ibywRHR4

I know I could've improved timing for the intro drums. After I uploaded the song I caught that and it pissed me off.

(BTW I would've used Newgrounds [In fact I did] but they take a while for your first audio submission to be accounted according to a screen I got right after submitting it almost two days ago.)

[Cyanite]

The melody didn't really sound like it went to any of the chords under it.

I'd find better percussion samples before you try to make them the focal point of your tracks. Use hi-hat samples, just kicks and snares don't cut it. And stick with one kick and one snare sample per track for now, randomly going between different kicks and snares is just distracting.

All things considered it's still pretty good for a first attempt.

[NumiGamer]

Thanks for the feedback. Once I finished the song, I listened to it, and something seemed odd about it, but I couldn't really pinpoint what. I see what you're saying about that stuff. Thanks for the advice ^_^