04-7-2012, 05:35 PM | #1 |
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So you may have seen my thread before....
... about me failing my English Provincial.
Well, I am rewriting it on Thursday and I would like some feedback on my writing. This was the question: Discuss the jump in "Prelude to Jumping in the River" as a metaphor for making important decisions. Use paragraph form and support your response with specific references to the text. Here is the poem Here is my response: Please critique... This is a rough draft and I wrote in 15 minutes. I usually don't post my writing on the net because I am self-conscious but I need your guys' help.
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