(BETA RELEASE) The Piano Minipack of Elegance 2 [NEED GFX] - Page 2

**MarioNintendo** · 11-27-2018, 07:58 PM

Gave feedback on Normal Battle v2

**PixlSM** · 11-28-2018, 02:04 PM

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Gave feedback on Normal Battle v2

thanks, this more indepth feedback is appreciated.
I will probably still want to maintain consistency in pr but I will fix errors where applicable, and also work on toning down the heavy chart to be more unique from the oni. will send v3 later today. huge thanks!

**PixlSM** · 11-28-2018, 02:43 PM

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Normal Battle v2 (Pixl):
* 0.68s For PR, should be "212" instead of "121". This happens more than once.
* 8.54s, 15.17s, ..: The PR for this arrow is wrong (considering arrow above)
* Measure 11: PR is wrong, should do something like "2 123" instead of having an 8th jack. Applies more than once.

fixed[/quote]

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* 23.440s PR with arrow below

this is flat out wrong the note you mentioned is clearly a lower pitch than the note before it

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* 25.30s There should not be a jump

I think theres a very noticable volume increase on that note to warrant a jump ( for instance, the same 24th melody plays again half a measure later, its quiet a noticable difference imo)

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* 27.16s to 27.68s, there shouldn't be any jack here for PR. This mistake applies for similar bits every time in this section

some of these should be jacks but I did miss part of the pr here, fixed.

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* 28.61s There should not be jumps here

same case with significant boost in volume on these notes, I think its warranted

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* 31.01s Should be a down arrow for PR

checked, this is not true, these notes have different pitches

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* 1m14.95s Note should be different than the one below

pr here between the single note and the triplets is sacrificed in order to keep proper pr between the 2 sets of triplets, which are by far the more interesting part of the melody. an 8th jack at this speed is not significant enough for this to cause issue. I would have to sacrifice pr in some way or another here regardless.

HOWEVER
after reading your next correction and making fixes based on it I can actually keep pr right for both so thats nice. fixed (I do have to break pr later in the due to this change but its very minor)

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* 1m15.16s This should be "434" instead of "432"

fixed

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* 1m18.26s to 1m21.57s This section is copy pasted from the one above, yet the notes are different. This should be reflected in PR.

fixed

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* 1m23.75s Starting here, there should not be jacks anymore

semi fixed, theres still 1 minijack but the rest is fixed

also changed up heavy a bit, it breaks away from pr in a few places and has no 16th jacks, with fairly lenient patterns. it is still the same on a lot of levels but I think its distinctly different now.
v3 sent

**MarioNintendo** · 11-29-2018, 05:03 PM

Wrote feedback on v3

Thanks!

**PixlSM** · 11-29-2018, 05:34 PM

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*7.51s and the arrow right before it are the same, but according to PR the one at 7.51s should be lower (applies more than once)

This was done to fix pr a few notes later. there is no way around pr being a bit broken here, and I figured this sacrifice is better than the previous one.

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*14.34s This triplet is the same as the subliminal one in 13.51s. I know for the (14)34 you picture the left arrow to be with the melody. However the triplet at 14.34s still clashes a bit.

I dont really see the issue here but ill be glad to fix if theres an issue here. this part seems to follow pr just fine as far as i can tell

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*23.44s You misunderstood my initial feedback! This note clashes with 23.65s: different sounds, but same notes. I am not "flat-out wrong"

Applies more than once

that was harsher sounding words than I meant, my bad. that being said, I dont think breaking PR even further is worth it over an 8th jack when theres already the 32nd trills and 16th jacks in the file. the 8th jack doesnt stand out too much imo.

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*27.27s Why is this arrow the same as the one above? This should not be a jack, it is clearly a different note. I also pointed this out in my initial feedback. Applies more than once

It sounds like the same pitch to me for that part of the melody, and if it weren't, I would be forced to break my 4 lane pr and do some gross wrapping for a single note. wrapping pr for a single note is gross

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*31.10s Could be a down arrow because different sound than 30.89s

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*1m15.58s This triplet was fine the was it used to be (the sound is descending on each note), why did you change it? In this section, triplets like 1m15.16s should be indeed be "323", but triplets like 1m15.58s should be "321".

my bad, I wasnt paying attention when fixing that and assumed all the triples should have been 323/212. fixed

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*1m28.20s Food for thought: this is the last chord and it's the lowest in the entire song. It could be neat to end on a "(12)" instead of a "(13)". You could have that by doing "...(23)4(13)4(12)"

this would break the PR for the melody since that last beat is entirely descending. I changed it to [14] for emphasis, if that's better.
sending v4

**XelNya** · 11-29-2018, 06:59 PM

Sent the fixes and two other files.

**MarioNintendo** · 11-29-2018, 07:27 PM

Thanks guys!

**MarioNintendo** · 12-9-2018, 05:31 PM

Updated reviews. Still need a lot of gfx...

Cataclysm- · 12-12-2018, 10:12 AM

Out of curiosity are subs for this closed?

Cataclysm- · 12-12-2018, 11:41 AM

Also have some GFX hopefully these are good enough

**MarioNintendo** · 12-14-2018, 03:39 PM

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Out of curiosity are subs for this closed?

Subs are totally open! But I'm releasing this on December 31st at the latest, so keep this in mind.

Also, THANKS for the graphics, these are great!!

Cataclysm- · 12-15-2018, 12:10 AM

Alright cool

suicidaln00b · 12-19-2018, 09:59 AM

i may or may not submit some last minute shit to this huhu

song im stepping if it matters https://soundcloud.com/ricora/k92emafyqpz1

edit: sent the thing

**XelNya** · 12-20-2018, 11:36 PM

Sent overture fixes.

Iggybuggydo · 12-21-2018, 04:44 AM

Tried a set. Haven't been able to get it to where I'd like it to be, but perhaps it is still adequate. Let me know.

**MarioNintendo** · 12-22-2018, 01:42 PM

Thanks for the contribution, guys!! I'll look at them asap.

@ Iggybuggydo
Thanks for the graphics, that's perfect!!

suicidaln00b · 12-23-2018, 05:23 AM

sent fixes

**Soul.** · 12-23-2018, 11:12 PM

Finished with one song. Let me know if you need anything changed.

Iggybuggydo · 12-23-2018, 11:42 PM

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Finished with one song. Let me know if you need anything changed.

Crap. Was just finishing a set for this as you posted it. I'll update this reply if I start work on another set so I don't get ninja'd again.

**Soul.** · 12-23-2018, 11:43 PM

Oops. :l

11-29-2018, 06:59 PM	#26
XelNya [Nobody liked that.] Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 3,358	Re: (Reborn!!) The Piano Minipack of Elegance 2 [NEED GFX] Sent the fixes and two other files.

12-19-2018, 09:59 AM	#33
suicidaln00b FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 160	Re: (Reborn!!) The Piano Minipack of Elegance 2 [NEED GFX] i may or may not submit some last minute shit to this huhu song im stepping if it matters https://soundcloud.com/ricora/k92emafyqpz1 edit: sent the thing Last edited by suicidaln00b; 12-19-2018 at 02:05 PM..

12-20-2018, 11:36 PM	#34
XelNya [Nobody liked that.] Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 3,358	Re: (Reborn!!) The Piano Minipack of Elegance 2 [NEED GFX] Sent overture fixes.

12-21-2018, 04:44 AM	#35
Iggybuggydo FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 15	Re: (Reborn!!) The Piano Minipack of Elegance 2 [NEED GFX] Tried a set. Haven't been able to get it to where I'd like it to be, but perhaps it is still adequate. Let me know.

12-23-2018, 05:23 AM	#37
suicidaln00b FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 160	Re: (release: Demember 31st) The Piano Minipack of Elegance 2 [NEED GFX] sent fixes

12-23-2018, 11:12 PM	#38
Soul. Very simple indeed. sip Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 190	Re: (release: Demember 31st) The Piano Minipack of Elegance 2 [NEED GFX] Finished with one song. Let me know if you need anything changed. __________________ FFR and SM = 1.9-2x (CVM,) (Delta noteskin) (Down) Solo = 700-725c (SDFJKL) (CS note, Orbular) (Down) Last edited by Soul.; 12-23-2018 at 11:18 PM.. Reason: Forgot to add something

12-23-2018, 11:43 PM	#40
Soul. Very simple indeed. sip Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 190	Re: (release: Demember 31st) The Piano Minipack of Elegance 2 [NEED GFX] Oops. :l __________________ FFR and SM = 1.9-2x (CVM,) (Delta noteskin) (Down) Solo = 700-725c (SDFJKL) (CS note, Orbular) (Down)

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