hey who wants to review my bad files - Page 2

Wayward Vagabond · 12-6-2014, 01:55 PM

you just have to know what you're looking at

**VisD** · 12-6-2014, 02:02 PM

okay here are some brief things

donkey punch
a lot of missed 16ths, especially around "areas of special interest" like 37.933s and 42.670s. Something new happening in the song doesn't mean you need to drop all the other layering immediately, the note coloring (for 37.933) and increase in layering on the 8th (for 42.670s) for instance is already giving those one-off events their due

please get ddream and re-do the syncing on the bursts

the 16th jumpjacks are kinda irritating in their spikiness because everything else is so easy. especially the long split ones. nothing too major but consider splitting up the ones that go on for four jacks into 2 and 2. e.g. [23][23][14][14][23] instead of [23]^4 at 86.485s

edit; oh yeah early in the song there are 24ths that don't really seem to go to anything

overall this isn't bad. xandertrax would be disappointed

**Fission** · 12-6-2014, 02:05 PM

donkey punch has numerous missing notes, listen on .7/.6. also some layering inconsistencies (@ 76.45 and @79.54s for example). you stepped @ 19.74s as a jumptrill but every else as jacks??? in a lot of places you have different pitches of the melody stepped as the same jump.

it has potential and you have some idea of what you're doing, but it needs a lot of work.

**Fission** · 12-6-2014, 02:07 PM

may or may not look at the other files later

**rayword45** · 12-6-2014, 02:08 PM

Give me an idea of how to replace the jumptrill. I went in with a jack idea (for the whole song) but then I decided an 8 or 9 note jumpjack would be complete overkill

**Fission** · 12-6-2014, 02:09 PM

it's not really a matter of replacing the jumptrill, i'm just pointing out that it's inconsistent with how everything else is stepped. you'd probably be better off just making all of the other jacks jumptrills or something.

EDIT: btw this song isn't that great for stepping, it's a lot of the same triple note rhythm repeatedly

**s1rnight** · 12-6-2014, 02:28 PM

im glad that you said that you sucked in the OP, i was tryin hard to develop my own opinion on it and am pleased that to see its already been developed for me

**rayword45** · 12-6-2014, 05:34 PM

Someone please review my !(Z)X(Z)! or The Hop files? They're worse than Donkey Punch.

**SKG_Scintill** · 12-7-2014, 09:19 AM

I like xandertrax's files

MinaciousGrace · 12-7-2014, 09:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by s1rnight

im glad that you said that you sucked in the OP, i was tryin hard to develop my own opinion on it and am pleased that to see its already been developed for me

at first i was worried because i don't remember making this post

then i realized it isn't my post

i'm not sure which is more disconcerting

**gold stinger** · 12-7-2014, 11:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SKG_Scintill

I like xandertrax's files

bby ur gonna love my files

**SKG_Scintill** · 12-7-2014, 11:52 AM

your Children's War file is already one of my favourites

12-6-2014, 01:55 PM	#21
Wayward Vagabond Confirmed Heartbreaker Join Date: Jul 2012 Age: 35 Posts: 5,858	Re: hey who wants to review my bad files you just have to know what you're looking at __________________

12-6-2014, 02:02 PM	#22
VisD FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 1,195	Re: hey who wants to review my bad files okay here are some brief things donkey punch a lot of missed 16ths, especially around "areas of special interest" like 37.933s and 42.670s. Something new happening in the song doesn't mean you need to drop all the other layering immediately, the note coloring (for 37.933) and increase in layering on the 8th (for 42.670s) for instance is already giving those one-off events their due please get ddream and re-do the syncing on the bursts the 16th jumpjacks are kinda irritating in their spikiness because everything else is so easy. especially the long split ones. nothing too major but consider splitting up the ones that go on for four jacks into 2 and 2. e.g. [23][23][14][14][23] instead of [23]^4 at 86.485s edit; oh yeah early in the song there are 24ths that don't really seem to go to anything overall this isn't bad. xandertrax would be disappointed __________________ Last edited by VisD; 12-6-2014 at 02:05 PM..

12-6-2014, 02:05 PM	#23
Fission no Join Date: Jan 2004 Age: 33 Posts: 1,850	Re: hey who wants to review my bad files donkey punch has numerous missing notes, listen on .7/.6. also some layering inconsistencies (@ 76.45 and @79.54s for example). you stepped @ 19.74s as a jumptrill but every else as jacks??? in a lot of places you have different pitches of the melody stepped as the same jump. it has potential and you have some idea of what you're doing, but it needs a lot of work. Last edited by Fission; 12-6-2014 at 02:06 PM..

12-6-2014, 02:07 PM	#24
Fission no Join Date: Jan 2004 Age: 33 Posts: 1,850	Re: hey who wants to review my bad files may or may not look at the other files later Last edited by Fission; 12-6-2014 at 02:07 PM..

12-6-2014, 02:08 PM	#25
rayword45 Local Teenage Wastebasket Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: My bed Age: 26 Posts: 3,189	Re: hey who wants to review my bad files Give me an idea of how to replace the jumptrill. I went in with a jack idea (for the whole song) but then I decided an 8 or 9 note jumpjack would be complete overkill __________________ The above post has a 50% chance of being useless. Potentially. Maybe. BEST AAAs: WANDERLUST, Pandora, Necropotence, Mourning The Lost, Eradication, Feldschlacht Hey, we need some users on this site. Please join. And if you have not recommended any albums yet, do so. Please. I have a goal to reach. Here. NO WAIT THAT SHIT'S OLD GO HERE INSTEAD. Last edited by rayword45; 12-6-2014 at 02:09 PM..

12-6-2014, 02:09 PM	#26
Fission no Join Date: Jan 2004 Age: 33 Posts: 1,850	Re: hey who wants to review my bad files it's not really a matter of replacing the jumptrill, i'm just pointing out that it's inconsistent with how everything else is stepped. you'd probably be better off just making all of the other jacks jumptrills or something. EDIT: btw this song isn't that great for stepping, it's a lot of the same triple note rhythm repeatedly Last edited by Fission; 12-6-2014 at 02:12 PM..

12-6-2014, 02:28 PM	#27
s1rnight ( ¯u¯)-b Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 387	Re: hey who wants to review my bad files im glad that you said that you sucked in the OP, i was tryin hard to develop my own opinion on it and am pleased that to see its already been developed for me __________________

12-6-2014, 05:34 PM	#28
rayword45 Local Teenage Wastebasket Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: My bed Age: 26 Posts: 3,189	Re: hey who wants to review my bad files Someone please review my !(Z)X(Z)! or The Hop files? They're worse than Donkey Punch. __________________ The above post has a 50% chance of being useless. Potentially. Maybe. BEST AAAs: WANDERLUST, Pandora, Necropotence, Mourning The Lost, Eradication, Feldschlacht Hey, we need some users on this site. Please join. And if you have not recommended any albums yet, do so. Please. I have a goal to reach. Here. NO WAIT THAT SHIT'S OLD GO HERE INSTEAD.

12-7-2014, 09:19 AM	#29
SKG_Scintill Spun a twirly fruitcake, Join Date: Feb 2009 Age: 31 Posts: 3,865	Re: hey who wants to review my bad files I like xandertrax's files

12-7-2014, 11:52 AM	#32
SKG_Scintill Spun a twirly fruitcake, Join Date: Feb 2009 Age: 31 Posts: 3,865	Re: hey who wants to review my bad files your Children's War file is already one of my favourites

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