05-13-2009, 03:58 PM | #1 |
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space girl & andrea
space girl.
mother with quaking hands, i will come back from mars; but only if you let me go. andrea. balconies with a view of the sea, concrete jungles & clean nights after hurricanes. the east has taken you to sun-kissed lands with blue mountains. i wait. (i miss you.) feedback? c: Last edited by she became me; 05-13-2009 at 09:07 PM.. |
05-15-2009, 05:21 PM | #2 |
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Re: space girl & andrea
I'm not certain enough of what this is supposed to be to dislike this, so I'm going to give it my approval. I can't figure out one bad thing to say about it, because I'm so goddamn confused by it.
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05-15-2009, 05:22 PM | #3 |
Resident Rock Climber
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Re: space girl & andrea
what?
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05-15-2009, 06:33 PM | #4 |
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Re: space girl & andrea
i entirely agree with mead
i don't see a scrap of meaning in either of these, and if there is one, it's extremely obfuscated makes me think of shrooms poetry
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05-15-2009, 07:09 PM | #5 |
huehuehue
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Re: space girl & andrea
I'm going to have to agree here, because I really don't know what you're trying to get at with these.
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