Mid as well throw out my love poem!

[badman7772]

Well I put this on my random thoughts like 3 weeks ago and only my fake family gave me opinions about it. I kinda need some opinions on what people think about it. I wrote it while I was thinking about someone.

I never knew what to say
From the moment I said hey.
From the day we met in the bay
to the time we went away.

I was always really shy
when it was the time you walked by.
I just looked up in the sky
and dreamed of you and I.

On a lovely passionate romantic date
That I know you wouldn't hate.
Then you gave me this long wet kiss
That I knew you wanted me to take.

Then I asked you to be my soulmate
That will be there until my fate.
You said yes without a doubt
And you said it with a shout.

I woke up looking very down
Crying with a frown
Knowing that my love of life
Is gone out of town.

I hope she reads this poem because it's basicly really true.
Baby I just wanna say that I love you!

[who_cares973]

its just lovely...

[Tokzic]

there is no original thought here and the rhyming made me bash my head into the desk