08-9-2006, 12:25 AM | #1 | |
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Love, Girls, and DDR
I thought of this while sleeping. I will use my name (Sean) and my other friend's names.
Sypnosis: A kid has problems at school, not to mention a DDR addiction and love for a lot of girls. Chapter 1: The Best and The Worst He was a normal kid. Crushes, addictions, math genius, school problems, you know. The usual. It was already a raining afternoon as Sean Roberson got out of the shower to get his looks on. "Well," he says. "another day of DDR; another day of Dell ignoring me." As any Samurai or 6th grader would know, Lydeel Rapada was a guy magnet. She was always attracting new people to her every day. Sean had always tried to talk to her, but then she ignored her always. Her boyfriend, Josh Matias, was on Sean's side and would do anything to get Dell to be Sean's friend. About fourteen minutes later, the phone rang. Sean ran while putting on his jacket and cap on. "You got Sean," he said. "Talk to me." "It's Andrea," the person on the other end said. Andrea (commonly known as Drea or Andie), was Dell's best friend, and was some part of friend with Sean. "Joy; what do you want?" "When are you coming to the arcade? We're here and Dell wouldn't want to be kept waiting?" Sean heard this, and said, "I'm on my way." As he made his way out of his military apartment building, the rain sliced across Sean's face, even though he had his hood on, the rain penetrated his protection. He tried his best to run through the rain, but he always slowed down. Jeez, he thought. It's colder than Pluto in December. When he arrived at the arcade sometime later, he spotted his friend, Romar, on the Extreme machine trying out Double. Apperently, he was bad. "Ro," Sean said. "you need to work on that manuver." "Thanks," Romar answered. Sean sat by the BeatMania machine where others were. Sean heard something in his brain. It said, "You must befriend Dell." Sean was then freaked out for about 20 minutes. More to come soon!
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08-9-2006, 12:31 AM | #2 |
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Re: Love, Girls, and DDR
I loved it except for one part. Which I absolutely hated.
More to come soon, should be More to come NOW! Me wantie read. Very good. NiK |
08-9-2006, 01:01 PM | #3 |
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Re: Love, Girls, and DDR
I smell another "DDR all the way".....
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08-9-2006, 01:29 PM | #4 |
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LOL
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08-9-2006, 01:33 PM | #5 |
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Re: Love, Girls, and DDR
I just had an exclamation mark appear over my head, with a fast, alerty upward-scaled sound sample to represent my change in attention.
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08-9-2006, 01:51 PM | #6 |
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Re: Love, Girls, and DDR
I shoot your exclamation mark with my SOCOM.
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08-10-2006, 10:06 AM | #8 |
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Re: Love, Girls, and DDR
Oh man, that was pretty good. Write more soon please.
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08-10-2006, 11:04 AM | #9 | |
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With fear rushing through his veins, nothing made the situation better. Sean had to go in front of a crowd adn play for his life. The small military arcade felt like hell, you can't escape. He quickly ran to the change machine and inserted his five dollar bill. He then felt someone tap his shoulder.
"You got a crowd waiting, man," Rafael said to him. "Thanks, Raf," Sean answered. "I'm just nervous. I never played in front of a big crowd before." Rafael rolled his eyes. "Whatever." Then, out of the rain, three more girls entered the premises. Joal, Haley, and Szanice came in, all soaking wet. Sean ignored them and stepped on. It's a gamble, more like gambol, he thought. Playing doubles came in worse. And, in the crowd, Romar smiled. Josh did the same. "Here goes," Sean said silently. Inserting his coins, he selected double. Out in the crowd, everyone watched in awe as Sean browsed the song wheel to find a good song. He switched through the sort modes repeatedly. Tempo. Alphabetical order. The top 30. Seires of origin. Defualt. Joal was impatient and wanted to see Sean fail. She yelled, "Pick something already!" What a bitch, he thought. Then it hit him. Little Bitch. he thought he would play that first. He found it, and selected it. When the mods screen came up, he applied 1.5X Solo. Here goes, Sean thought again. Before getting into postition, he heard someone yell out, "One, two!" Everyone looked at Romar, and then smiled. They started clapping to the beat, then they said it again: "One, two!" Sean smiled as he manuvered in and out of the center, even though he was bar raping. Everyone watched in awe as he did various moves. Kneedrops, slaps, and spins filled the routine. But the it happened. On the bridge to the last verse, he fell off the back of the stage, head first. "Is he okay?" Haley asked. "I don't know," Rafael answered, "that was one harsh fall." "I'm glad he didn't matrix walk at all," Josh said. But then being the moronic girl she was, Joal yelled, "Yay! He's dead!" Josh got a pencil and poked his arm. It moved. "He's alive," he declared, "And he's still breathing." Sean awoke 20 minutes later, not remembering a thing. That was emberassment. Next: Chapter 3: From Start To Finish
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08-10-2006, 01:03 PM | #10 |
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Re: Love, Girls, and DDR
yayayayaya
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08-10-2006, 01:24 PM | #11 |
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That was the absolute sex.
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08-10-2006, 01:52 PM | #12 |
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I orgasmed twice.
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08-10-2006, 05:08 PM | #13 | |
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Re: Love, Girls, and DDR
What?
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08-11-2006, 11:35 AM | #14 | |
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From Start To Finish
The next day was bad for him. In his first period gym class, the locker room was full of talk. Ronel, Sean's other friend, talked about him owning DDR Supernova.
"You're kidding, right?" Sean asked. "Nope," Ronel said modestly. "I got it." From the other side of the locker room, Sky and Tallon, two of the fastest in the class, overheard the conversation. "I thought that wasn't out yet!" Sky yelled. "Me, too," Tallon added. "And my girlfriend plays DDR." "Shut up, man." "Hey, why don't you! You're the one who gave Marcus a black eye!" "It's true," Sean added. Aside from the arguement, Sean looked at the clock. "We only have two minutes! Quick, get your shorts on!" When gym class ended, Sean solemly walked to his math class with an unusual silence. The quarter went by slower than usual. He went in and out of the room, than walked to his locker. "Sean, what's up with you?" Alonzo asked him. "Nothing, just being quiet is all," he replied. "Well, you're quieter than usual." Joal added. "You said I was dead." "Shut up." "Make me." They fought for two minutes, walking down to math class. It then resulted from Joal's yelling to her strength. Without realizing Mr. Woody was there, she pushed Sean down, head first on Haley's chair. "Joal!" Mr. Woody exclaimed. "What did you do?" "You're dead, girl," Mariah said. In all her guilt, she dropped her binder on her desk. He still remained in the room, but he was out for 14 minutes. He looked up, and felt quite tipsy. We also realized he was drooling, and in total emberassment, he wiped it off his lip. Just then, he felt Haley tap his shoulder. "Can you help me out here?" She asked. "Ok, what is it today?' Sean redirected. "More retarded algebra. It's too hard." "Ok, let me help." Three hours later, after lunch, he had a social studies class. Which, of course, was the last class that he would see Lydeel. She smilied as she talked to Szanice, about the incident yesterday. "He fell like a lunatic," Dell laughed. "I don't know," Szanice contradicted. "He fell hard, and no one had no right to laugh at him." Dell scoffed. "Ateh, he's a moron. Period." "Whatever." Sitting down in complete ridicule, he took out his glasses. "Te queiro Taco Bell." "Shut up, Tipsy." "Make me." Tabreia annyoned Sean throughout 4th period. Nothing made him better about yesterday's incident. Next: Chapter 4: Resort to FFR
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08-11-2006, 04:21 PM | #15 |
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08-13-2006, 03:21 AM | #18 |
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Re: Love, Girls, and DDR
Nice. I like it aside from the few errors.
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08-14-2006, 04:42 PM | #19 |
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Re: Love, Girls, and DDR
I'm pretty sure this is missing a "FAAAAAAAARGOOOOOOOOOONNNNN" somewhere in there.
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08-18-2006, 12:46 AM | #20 |
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Re: Love, Girls, and DDR
Continue on with the story please.
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