12-25-2007, 11:11 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2006
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Tension
It's biting at me
Eating away sanity I'm breaking down Deteriorating my vanity Like in a thick mist I breathe in an ocean sealing my soul living under an oppression I await my fate slowly but surely for the answer of my true mate... Lovely. Merry Christmas ( and happy holidays for those who want to be politically correct) question: should i stick to free verse? I haven't done many rhyming poems XD
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 [url=http://www.narutoflow.com/character-quiz/]Take the Naruto Character for brawlers: 2836-1905-4019 I don't know how well it'll work, but give me a add  , or pm me so i can add you.
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