12-6-2014, 01:55 PM | #21 |
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Re: hey who wants to review my bad files
you just have to know what you're looking at
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12-6-2014, 02:02 PM | #22 |
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Re: hey who wants to review my bad files
okay here are some brief things
donkey punch a lot of missed 16ths, especially around "areas of special interest" like 37.933s and 42.670s. Something new happening in the song doesn't mean you need to drop all the other layering immediately, the note coloring (for 37.933) and increase in layering on the 8th (for 42.670s) for instance is already giving those one-off events their due please get ddream and re-do the syncing on the bursts the 16th jumpjacks are kinda irritating in their spikiness because everything else is so easy. especially the long split ones. nothing too major but consider splitting up the ones that go on for four jacks into 2 and 2. e.g. [23][23][14][14][23] instead of [23]^4 at 86.485s edit; oh yeah early in the song there are 24ths that don't really seem to go to anything overall this isn't bad. xandertrax would be disappointed
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12-6-2014, 02:05 PM | #23 |
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Re: hey who wants to review my bad files
donkey punch has numerous missing notes, listen on .7/.6. also some layering inconsistencies (@ 76.45 and @79.54s for example). you stepped @ 19.74s as a jumptrill but every else as jacks??? in a lot of places you have different pitches of the melody stepped as the same jump.
it has potential and you have some idea of what you're doing, but it needs a lot of work. Last edited by Fission; 12-6-2014 at 02:06 PM.. |
12-6-2014, 02:07 PM | #24 |
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may or may not look at the other files later
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12-6-2014, 02:08 PM | #25 |
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Re: hey who wants to review my bad files
Give me an idea of how to replace the jumptrill. I went in with a jack idea (for the whole song) but then I decided an 8 or 9 note jumpjack would be complete overkill
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12-6-2014, 02:09 PM | #26 |
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it's not really a matter of replacing the jumptrill, i'm just pointing out that it's inconsistent with how everything else is stepped. you'd probably be better off just making all of the other jacks jumptrills or something.
EDIT: btw this song isn't that great for stepping, it's a lot of the same triple note rhythm repeatedly Last edited by Fission; 12-6-2014 at 02:12 PM.. |
12-6-2014, 02:28 PM | #27 |
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Re: hey who wants to review my bad files
im glad that you said that you sucked in the OP, i was tryin hard to develop my own opinion on it and am pleased that to see its already been developed for me
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12-6-2014, 05:34 PM | #28 |
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Someone please review my !(Z)X(Z)! or The Hop files? They're worse than Donkey Punch.
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12-7-2014, 09:19 AM | #29 |
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I like xandertrax's files
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12-7-2014, 09:52 AM | #30 | |
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12-7-2014, 11:44 AM | #31 |
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12-7-2014, 11:52 AM | #32 |
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Re: hey who wants to review my bad files
your Children's War file is already one of my favourites
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