Old 10-14-2012, 09:17 PM   #1
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Not whip, WIP. Work In Progress. You're a dummy if you actually thought

Anyway, that's right! I stepped a song tonight (Unshakeable by Celldweller), something I haven't done in a long time, and it's a genre of song I had never stepped before. I think it's fun, but I'm at the same time unsure of the patterns choice/song length/diversity/fun factor, so I'm asking you guys to tell me what you think!

Praise/blame anything you could find, this would be very appreciated! I plan on sending this to the next batch, so hit me with any help you could provide.

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Old 10-14-2012, 09:19 PM   #2
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Uh, if you could upload on mediafire, that would be awesome. I can't dl from the link you provide.
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Mediafire mirror: http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?lpn264jk674b7qz
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Old 10-14-2012, 09:22 PM   #4
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Wow that was quick thanks FM!
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Hehe, no problem :P
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Old 10-14-2012, 09:25 PM   #6
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Doesn't seem very on beat during the second half of the song. Other than that it was fun!
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Doesn't seem very on beat during the second half of the song. Other than that it was fun!
I changed the offset, seems fine now. Thanks for the heads up!
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the jumps you make for measures 32-38. The sound you're following, you don't repeat it for measures 40-56. It throws me off when the jumps aren't going to the same sound. You can't really tell you're stepping the vocals until around measure 48.

Also, the three 16ths you put in measure 43, you can barely make out what you are going to.

Besides that, solid file.
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the jumps you make for measures 32-38. The sound you're following, you don't repeat it for measures 40-56. It throws me off when the jumps aren't going to the same sound. You can't really tell you're stepping the vocals until around measure 48. Indeed, that could become a problem. I did it this way, thought, because it is what granted me the most linear difficulty curve. I tried keeping the jumps constant and I couldn't find a way to do it without either being too easy or filled with jumps to incorporate the vocals as well

Also, the three 16ths you put in measure 43, you can barely make out what you are going to. True, but, once you heard them, they're pretty clear, are they not? xP I put them because I'm 100% sure the judges in the queue will think they're missing notes if I omit them.

Besides that, solid file.
Thanks a lot, though, made me rethink those parts, really appreciated!
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The second part is definitely true. I see your point there. XD lol
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