A little writing

[MetalAtlas]

A Glimmer of Sorrow

A broken and battered soul
Underneath a bruised and bloodied heart
Animate feeling hardened to coal
A life now torn apart

Eyes like glass, stomach like lead
Hands clawing at the throat of inevitable
A second's pass, our daily bread
Prepares us not for the incredible

Life seems almost too much to bare
Love found, love gained, love lost, love stained
Dries our tears and leaves its glare
Misery mocks our pitiful restrain

Somehow, somewhere lies a glimmer of hope
A quick and heavenly glint of the eye
While the hands of sorrow still grope
Wherein the newly blackened hearted lie

Sometimes even the darkened of mind
Can be tainted and cracked open eggshell white
Even a tiny shining sliver can find
That where happiness shines oh so slight

Henceforth the battle of light and dark
The wails of agony and the songs of lovebirds
Scarring life, leaving mark
Clash into ill forgotten words

I love you, I hate you
I miss you, i loath you
I need you, I own you
I have you, i lost you
I am whole, i am nothing
I am strong, i am helpless
I am one, i am many
i am alone
I am never alone

And a glint in the eye become a shining beacon
To all who are love lost, all who are life lost
To the answers of life to which those are seeking
Of the neglegent paths that we never crossed
Of the sorrow filled rivers that are often leaking
To the memories of forgotten happiness never tossed-


The shimmering image of a heart is winking



All Eternity

Now that heart that had been wrapped so tight,
Can loosen its grasp,forsee the light
It searched for love so longingly,
I love you i still love you for all eternity

An angels light opened my heart,
Taught me new things, gave me a fresh start
Our close bond had been been so forsakenly,
I love you i still love you for all eternity

Desperate times called for desperate measures,
Trying to hold close to all of my treasures
Holding them high for the world to see,
I love you i still love you for all eternity

Perhaps moving too fast, perhaps moving too slow,
But completely devoted from the get go
I just tried to be the best that I could be,
I love you I still love you for all eternity

A future so clear and a future so bright,
The world's harsh reality calmed by starry night
A perfect haven never just a possibility,
I love you I still love you for all eternity

Alas the skies cast down its hazing glare,
My treasures taken as only I can stare
It seems the inevitable happens eventually
But I love you i still love you for all eternity

It is said that time heals all wounds,
And the wolf's cries howling over many moons
Often say that what is is what should never be,
But I love you i still love you for all eternity

I suppose one has to hope that love stays on track,
And that somehow loved ones find there way back
And remember those whispered words, an everlasting decree,
"I love you, I'll always love you for all eternity "

oh and would anyone be interested in reading resident evil4 fanfiction lol XD

[-paexaea-]

I like your writing style. However, it still needs more murder curse.

[mead1]

Originally Posted by MetalAtlas

oh and would anyone be interested in reading resident evil4 fanfiction lol XD

<*-*> yes yes please

[MetalAtlas]

Originally Posted by mead1

<*-*> yes yes please

lol ok post here or pm cause i dunno which to do-

[mead1]

As the addicts revel in their own addictions,
and the old men profit from the addicts afflictions,
and a young woman digs in a dumpster for lunch,
and a man beats his wife because he loves his mistress too much,
and a pharmacist slips pain-killers under his jacket,
for five dollars a pop to the teenage drug racket,
and homeless sleep in the warmth of flaming trash cans
with four-dollar merlot clutched tight in frozen hands
and teenage muggers hide pistols beneath coats of black
and men stare longingly at children, planning their attack
as this city of sin sings a song that never ends,
I slit her throat knowing that I’m among friends.

[MetalAtlas]

wicked good but like scary dude lol