Red Fraction Pack - Page 6

ShadowDragon! · 10-23-2007, 06:33 PM

Just submited another simfile, Bagpipe.

XOX · 10-24-2007, 02:59 PM

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Originally Posted by dascookieman

iamme did once. never played it, it seemed superboring

oh, well, the song is awesong, but when I started to step it I found out that it would be kinda boring, but we'll see what I can do about it.

SoulSk8er69 · 10-26-2007, 12:58 AM

just submitted cloud control.

thinking of stepping pretty green onions for this

kommisar[os] · 10-26-2007, 05:50 AM

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Originally Posted by SoulSk8er69

just submitted cloud control.

thinking of stepping pretty green onions for this

please don't...

ShadowDragon! · 10-26-2007, 06:31 AM

So how did my simfiles do? (Bagpipe, Alien Temple) Tell me what's wrong with them so I can fix them.

**Rebirth0** · 10-26-2007, 06:39 AM

Nobody has played Bagpipe yet, but here is what one of our judges said for Alien Temple

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the minijacks don't fit at all. if they are correctly synced, then there should be more of them throughout the whole file, since whatever it's synced to is constant in the background for a lot of the song. 16th patterns could have been a little better in general. the 32nd patterns were annoying to hit and the trills could ruin an otherwise good score; 32nds like this should either be rolls or an easy-to-hit repeating pattern. don't use 16th freezes - i couldn't even tell if they were going to anything.

overall the big problems were inconsistent syncing and the 32nds. this song really isn't great either.

leadafro · 10-26-2007, 09:50 AM

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Originally Posted by Rebirth0

Nobody has played Bagpipe yet, but here is what one of our judges said for Alien Temple

He missed a major part of the song that was off.The 24ths he used at one part are not on sync.They are not 24ths at all.They are single 64th notes along with some single 32nd notes and 16th singles.

hmmm anyone play tribe attacker here?

SoulSk8er69 · 10-26-2007, 12:12 PM

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Originally Posted by kommisar[os]

please don't...

What's wrong with pretty green onions?

ShadowDragon! · 10-26-2007, 02:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Rebirth0

Nobody has played Bagpipe yet, but here is what one of our judges said for Alien Temple

I thought the song was cool and who ever judge it, thanks. I'll fix those problems and put it in the FFR database. Like you said, the song isn't that good anyway. It doesn't derserve to be in a pack like this, my steps aren't that good anyway lol.

Professor Raine · 10-26-2007, 06:16 PM

I sent in Blue owl & Mt. Red - a Symbol of Thrill a while ago. Now I gotta cross my fingers.

**Rebirth0** · 10-26-2007, 11:58 PM

Tribe Attacker:

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In measures 5 - 12 the little 16th streams should start with jumps

I'm questioning the layering, at least on the 12ths. They all feel like single note jacks and jumps instead of jumps and triples

It has some 16th triplets that are all jumps, and the last two are kinda like jacks (example: end of measure 16). The first two jumps in those should be removed

double jack gallop things (measure 20 and some other places) don't feel right. That yellow note doesn't need to be a jump, or even a jack maybe

Some other things too maybe but I'm too tired to think about any more errors. This sim could actually be pretty good and maybe accepted if these things are changed

Alioth · 10-27-2007, 02:20 PM

Legacy did his half of LunaMarionette Full Version and I am gonna do my half. If I am correct, you (Rebirth) stepped this already, right?

**Rebirth0** · 10-27-2007, 10:02 PM

If he did 2:30 of the song in like one day theres no way its gonna turn out to be a good sim

**revolutionomega** · 10-27-2007, 10:39 PM

Unless it was about 18-24 hours of that day. And then he'd have no life. LoL

Alioth · 10-29-2007, 08:16 AM

My ideas that will make this improve:

Replace Legacy with Iamme, Yessss (OMG PLEASE DO IT AS ****), Patashu, or aperson.
Make Kn33groW a judge.

That's it. I'll be making songs shortly for the pack, but having them heavily critiqued first before I submit since I kinda need it.

Necros140606 · 10-29-2007, 08:17 AM

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Originally Posted by revolutionomega

Unless it was about 18-24 hours of that day. And then he'd have no life. LoL

hahaha

Necros140606 · 10-29-2007, 08:18 AM

sure aperson will join i can alredy see him hanging out with us guys and sendin 7 sims to our pack.

Alioth · 10-29-2007, 08:20 AM

lmao idk, but Yesss needs to do it since his files are the best IMO.

kommisar[os] · 10-29-2007, 09:43 AM

leadafro · 10-29-2007, 10:13 AM

uhhh...Resubmitted tribe attacker.

10-23-2007, 06:33 PM	#101
ShadowDragon! FFR Player Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Mushroom Kingdom Age: 33 Posts: 152	Re: Red Fraction Pack Just submited another simfile, Bagpipe. __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

10-26-2007, 12:58 AM	#103
SoulSk8er69 FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Nevada Age: 33 Posts: 129	Re: Red Fraction Pack just submitted cloud control. thinking of stepping pretty green onions for this __________________ AKA OMEGAspike (omegaspike) Total number of sims as of 10/26/07: 75 Spread dfjk , C650 Solo

10-26-2007, 06:31 AM	#105
ShadowDragon! FFR Player Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Mushroom Kingdom Age: 33 Posts: 152	Re: Red Fraction Pack So how did my simfiles do? (Bagpipe, Alien Temple) Tell me what's wrong with them so I can fix them. __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

10-26-2007, 06:16 PM	#110
Professor Raine FFR Player Join Date: May 2007 Location: D: Age: 33 Posts: 1,560	Re: Red Fraction Pack I sent in Blue owl & Mt. Red - a Symbol of Thrill a while ago. Now I gotta cross my fingers. __________________ My simfilez ---- Dancing Rain : Dancing Rain 2

10-27-2007, 02:20 PM	#112
Alioth Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Age: 32 Posts: 526	Re: Red Fraction Pack Legacy did his half of LunaMarionette Full Version and I am gonna do my half. If I am correct, you (Rebirth) stepped this already, right?

10-27-2007, 10:02 PM	#113
Rebirth0 FFR Originalbro Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Kansas City, Missouri Age: 33 Posts: 8,750	Re: Red Fraction Pack If he did 2:30 of the song in like one day theres no way its gonna turn out to be a good sim

10-27-2007, 10:39 PM	#114
revolutionomega FFR Veteran Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: White Plains, New York Age: 32 Posts: 2,240	Re: Red Fraction Pack Unless it was about 18-24 hours of that day. And then he'd have no life. LoL __________________ "AW MAN, WE SUCK AGAIN!" - Rob Schneider, The Waterboy (1998)

10-29-2007, 08:16 AM	#115
Alioth Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Age: 32 Posts: 526	Re: Red Fraction Pack My ideas that will make this improve: Replace Legacy with Iamme, Yessss (OMG PLEASE DO IT AS ***), Patashu, or aperson. Make Kn33groW a judge. That's it. I'll be making songs shortly for the pack, but having them heavily critiqued first before I submit since I kinda need it. Last edited by Alioth; 10-29-2007 at 11:19 AM..*

10-29-2007, 08:18 AM	#117
Necros140606 FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Italy Age: 35 Posts: 1,088	Re: Red Fraction Pack sure aperson will join i can alredy see him hanging out with us guys and sendin 7 sims to our pack. __________________

10-29-2007, 08:20 AM	#118
Alioth Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Age: 32 Posts: 526	Re: Red Fraction Pack lmao idk, but Yesss needs to do it since his files are the best IMO. Last edited by Alioth; 10-29-2007 at 10:06 AM..

10-29-2007, 09:43 AM	#119
kommisar[os] Banned Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Moncton, NB, Canada Age: 33 Posts: 4,097	Re: Red Fraction Pack uhh

10-29-2007, 10:13 AM	#120
leadafro Tykeem Ultimatum Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Trying to play ITG where no arcades can be found. Age: 34 Posts: 975	Re: Red Fraction Pack uhhh...Resubmitted tribe attacker. __________________ I'm black yall I'm black yall I'm blickity black black and I'm back. Last edited by leadafro; 10-29-2007 at 10:53 AM..

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