Looking for a Collab

[Herogashix]

I'm having a little trouble with creativity at this point, along with the intro sounding a little empty in the background.

https://soundcloud.com/thesapphiredragon/diary-of-the-chosen-one-wip

[ScylaX]

lol
The intro was kickass with a great super strong heavy voice and then you just break everything down to put a naive random lead.
I don't plan to collab with you but, really, you should just work something harsher from the intro, as an example, you should just cut it instead of making the whole thing super long. Try adding more dynamism to the measure that begins on 0:23 or something and give up on your sweet-electric-music-project, because this wastes the whole point of the intro, to me.

Now it's all my taste but I thought you were beginning on a super awright track and you should keep it that way/develop from that point.

[Herogashix]

Originally Posted by ScylaX

The intro was kickass with a great super strong heavy voice and then you just break everything down to put a naive random lead.

I could split the song apart and work from the intro and make it with the same genre, then work separately with the same genre as the second part. Would that probably work? That would lead to making 2 totally different tracks.

[ScylaX]

Yeah why not, I'm all for innovating and finding plenty of ways to make great songs <3 if you're convinced you can do something from what you shown it's all up to you or the person that'll work with you and I'd really want to listen to the final result then