Old 09-11-2007, 06:48 PM   #1
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Default An old poem of mine

I wrote this back when my girlfriend and I were having relationship trouble.
Unfortunately, we aren't still together. But who cares? This thread is about
the art. Enjoy.


Brainwashed, the love hymns we sung each other to sleep
We dreamt silently, yet our hearts roar with intensity
Can I take you back to the first time our lips met
A blood rush of two smiles unseen on our faces
Our hearts pound vigorous, but emersed are two calm reflections
Since that day we have changed for neither worse nor better

Your beauty still shines through all your flaws
And I am still mesmerized how long I can gaze into the your soul
Cold tears are the avalanche that rushes down your face
And I can't help but to heal your cuts and wipe away your running makeup
Your fake smiles in photographs simply aren't appealing
But Its far fetched that the ones you give me are the ones you give the world

You live two different lives
A warmhearted lover
A depressed individual
The beauty in the mirror still makes it hard to tell...
Your split personality pulls me closer to you than you think
And now we're closer than ever, I'm one for fixing your catastrophe
So don't stop crying, don't stop hurting, and don't stop depending
I love your crying, pain, and need
I feel like the necessity of your life
I'm Brainwashed, Just live.
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Old 09-11-2007, 07:09 PM   #2
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Default Re: An old poem of mine

how can you tear blood

you can't tear a fluid
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