Loops On Mind (New song)

**powerfull** · 01-15-2013, 08:57 PM

I started this song back in December and kinda forgot about it until a couple days ago. I was hoping to get some tips/ feedback from the community here on how I could improve. I could put it on my Soundcloud, but I'm a little more strict with what I put on there (besides my pizza rap for FFR lol).

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/519264

**Ohaider** · 01-15-2013, 10:30 PM

I hear some guitar over it
Would be a very nice analog piece

DjMeas · 01-29-2013, 03:11 PM

I REALLY REALLY like the synth work and choice around the 55 second mark. I don't really have anything to say about the composition itself but maybe the drum work was a bit on the soft side for me. It seems to get engulfed by the powerful bass synth on my speakers

Great work!

01-15-2013, 08:57 PM	#1
powerfull Woof Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: MA Posts: 173	Loops On Mind (New song) I started this song back in December and kinda forgot about it until a couple days ago. I was hoping to get some tips/ feedback from the community here on how I could improve. I could put it on my Soundcloud, but I'm a little more strict with what I put on there (besides my pizza rap for FFR lol). http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/519264 __________________ Some music: http://soundcloud.com/wooffull

01-15-2013, 10:30 PM	#2
Ohaider FFR Veteran Join Date: Jun 2012 Age: 28 Posts: 2,893	Re: Loops On Mind (New song) I hear some guitar over it Would be a very nice analog piece

01-29-2013, 03:11 PM	#3
DjMeas FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 164	Re: Loops On Mind (New song) I REALLY REALLY like the synth work and choice around the 55 second mark. I don't really have anything to say about the composition itself but maybe the drum work was a bit on the soft side for me. It seems to get engulfed by the powerful bass synth on my speakers Great work! __________________ http://soundcloud.com/undercoverapplemusic/leaflette-across-the-ocean-ep [ Across the Ocean EP now availabe on iTunes/Amazon/Bandcamp! ]

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