02-3-2015, 04:30 PM | #1 |
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Storm At My Door(Elegy For Travman301)
I was too far from where the storm’d take hold To smell the rain before the pour and before the cold A wind carried on the lips of a widowed wife Smelled of rain and loss of life With a sense of foreboding, I asked the question Tears formed before she made mention Immediately a storm so ferocious Took hold and I stood there motionless How could a star that burns so bright be self-extinguished? How could one’s own value of life be so diminished? Nights are darker and emotions are worn Your life forever I will mourn
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02-3-2015, 04:30 PM | #2 |
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Re: Storm At My Door(Elegy For Travman301)
had to write an elegy for my creative writing class and this is what i went with.
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02-3-2015, 04:51 PM | #3 |
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Re: Storm At My Door(Elegy For Travman301)
very nice man, very fitting tone in memory of our boy. RIP trav
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