06-24-2007, 02:24 PM
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The Lonely Blooger - A Geek Romance
I spent the last week or so writing a romance story inspired by a girl I had a thing for. It is 10 parts and covers about 11 pages if you were to print it.
http://www.dawnerd.com/blog/category...onely-blogger/ The first part starts at the very bottom of the page. I know it could use some editing, but I would like to know what you think. |
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06-24-2007, 02:32 PM
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Re: The Lonely Blooger - A Geek Romance
The friend's name is "Tbag."
... Edit:: Okay, I just finished reading what you have. The story kind of drags and you seem to tell about a lot of unnecessary things. I say "seem" because you may be tying them into the story at some point. Also, a lot of the things that happen, like Troy's friends making a date for him with the girl (does she even have a name?), are events that are highly unlikely to take place in real life. Last edited by ShastaTwist; 06-24-2007 at 02:56 PM.. |
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06-24-2007, 10:03 PM
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Re: The Lonely Blooger - A Geek Romance
Most of the events would never happen in real life in the first place. Partially why it was written.
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