Kingdom Hearts FanFic

**Chromer** · 04-2-2004, 09:52 PM

Ok For Those of you who have heard me in the FFR Chat, for the last week I have been telling people about my Kingdom Hearts FanFic called Light and Darkness. This story continues after the ending of the first game and spans over two halves and ten chapters. Ok Enough talking this is an excerpt from the first chapter "Remeniscence":

"Sora, don't ever change."

"What Kairi?"

"Once we go and set sail, it'll be great."

The warm face of Kairi faded into darkness. Sora woke up panting hard and sat up from the ground. He looked into the dark and found his weapon, Oblivion.

"Firaga!"

The flame hit a pile of sticks and filled the tent with light. It had been a year since Sora first started his journey to destroy Ansem and the Heartless and save the hearts of Kairi and Riku, as well as his own/

Riku you fool, thought Sora, you just wanted to go and see what was out there. And Kairi. When will I ever see her again?

Sora grew angry at this thought and looked at the keyblade for a minute. He made his decision and carried it out.

"Strike Raid!,"he cried as he threw the keyblade into a nearby field.

"All you ever done was cause me pain and misery!" yelled Sora at the weapon. "Ever since I became the keyblade master Im always put in the choice to save myself and my friends or worlds."

Sora dropped to his knees an began to cry.

" I just miss all my friends and I wish I could find happiness"

"But True Happiness is not gained through personal triumphs and self-satisfaction. As the keyblade master you should continue to fight for the hearts of those you love, like me," said a girlish voice behind him.

Sora recognized the vioce and asked, "Kairi?"

So what will happen after this? Youll have to respond to this and tell me what you think. You can love it or hate it but I put alot of time and researched and played the game over 5 times to get the dialogue and details right. So uhhh thats it. Bye

Anticrombie0909 · 04-2-2004, 10:13 PM

If you liked Kingdom Hearts enough to write a fanfic over it, you'll probably hate me for saying this, but Kingdom Hearts is the lamest and most...hell, I'll say it, kiddy game I've ever seen. Bit hard to look tough when a dude with overlage shoes wielding a giant key is being backed up by Disney characters.

Also, for disturbing and homoerotic Harry Potter fanfiction, please click here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1470482

Feuergeist · 04-2-2004, 10:19 PM

WTF GROSS

**Chromer** · 04-2-2004, 10:20 PM

Like I said You either Love it or Hate it. It doesnt matter to me Im still going to finish this online though. Yeah his shoes are a little big though. lol

Arch0wl · 04-2-2004, 10:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anticrombie0909

hell, I'll say it, kiddy game I've ever seen.

Please stop playing games.

Thanks.

**Moogy** · 04-2-2004, 10:30 PM

eHarry · 04-2-2004, 10:35 PM

You can't judge a game like that..... it may look "kiddy" but in quality wise it is a great game. People say things like this all the time about games, such as Pop 'n music, without realising what the game is actually like, not how it looks.

ananana · 04-2-2004, 10:37 PM

Kingdom Hearts was awesome!

Chromer, it sounds good!

**Moogy** · 04-2-2004, 10:39 PM

Kingdom Hearts was an awesome game, but fanfiction of any form is unbelievably lame.

Anticrombie0909 · 04-2-2004, 10:42 PM

Hello, discrimination! I figured I'd get a lot of venom for posting that, but it's true. The game had a chance to be somewhat enjoyable, if they didn't have to inject disney into every nuance of it. I never liked Disney movies past the age of 7 anyway, so why would I want to play a game about one? There is nothing fun about fighting with Daffy. There is nothing exciting about collecting puppies. If I wanted to do that, I'd go volunteer at Kid's Club.

**Moogy** · 04-2-2004, 10:44 PM

Daffy is from Loony Tunes, dipshit.

Arch0wl · 04-2-2004, 11:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anticrombie0909

if they didn't have to inject disney into every nuance of it. I never liked Disney movies past the age of 7 anyway, so why would I want to play a game about one? There is nothing fun about fighting with Daffy. There is nothing exciting about collecting puppies. If I wanted to do that, I'd go volunteer at Kid's Club.

Get the fuck over yourself. Games being "kiddy" or not doesn't matter. Dumbfucks started complaining about this recently after fucking GTA3, and the next gen consoles were releases.

Feuergeist · 04-3-2004, 12:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moogy

Daffy is from Loony Tunes, dipshit.

hahaha owned

VxDx · 04-3-2004, 12:14 PM

You forgot the part where arch is a bisexual.

Lupin_the_3rd · 04-3-2004, 12:22 PM

I'm sorry, but I'm with Anticrombie on this one. Oh no! look out or i will smite thee with a key!!

ananana · 04-3-2004, 12:34 PM

That key is very sharp now...

Omeganitros · 04-3-2004, 01:04 PM

A) It's a very big key
B) The key is made of something metallic, and something that big made of something metallic = It would hurt if you got a beating with it.
C) It's magic. And whether it be Disney magic or Magic: The Gathering magic, magic still owns.

Thus:

The key owns.

Lupin_the_3rd · 04-3-2004, 08:25 PM

A) Let's say they make an oversized muffler a weapon

B)A key=a large piece of metal
A muffler=a large piece of metal

C) Mufflers are magical...mufflers allow cars to run better, and cars are cool. Therefore: Mufflers Own.

Think about how much cooler it would be to smash somebody with a muffler. You could even have the little dude say corny lines like: Man, that was exhausting!

COBOL · 04-3-2004, 11:07 PM

KH is dumb cuz its got gay disney characters in it.

Cyborg_Mermaid · 04-4-2004, 08:48 PM

I thought Kingdom Hearts would suck 'cause as an anime fan I have a hate for Disney. Square + Disney= EBIL! However I still played it and found it to be very good, in a way it's more strategically involved than most mainstream RPGs around. Also the story was a hell lot more "grown up" in the end.

As for the story, I like it a lot it just needs a bit more description in the dialogue so your audience can better understand the scene. ....Shut up, I'm an English student. --;

04-2-2004, 09:52 PM	#1
Chromer Hookers and Blow Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: You heard the robot. No fun. Age: 34 Posts: 4,981	Kingdom Hearts FanFic Ok For Those of you who have heard me in the FFR Chat, for the last week I have been telling people about my Kingdom Hearts FanFic called Light and Darkness. This story continues after the ending of the first game and spans over two halves and ten chapters. Ok Enough talking this is an excerpt from the first chapter "Remeniscence": "Sora, don't ever change." "What Kairi?" "Once we go and set sail, it'll be great." The warm face of Kairi faded into darkness. Sora woke up panting hard and sat up from the ground. He looked into the dark and found his weapon, Oblivion. "Firaga!" The flame hit a pile of sticks and filled the tent with light. It had been a year since Sora first started his journey to destroy Ansem and the Heartless and save the hearts of Kairi and Riku, as well as his own/ Riku you fool, thought Sora, you just wanted to go and see what was out there. And Kairi. When will I ever see her again? Sora grew angry at this thought and looked at the keyblade for a minute. He made his decision and carried it out. "Strike Raid!,"he cried as he threw the keyblade into a nearby field. "All you ever done was cause me pain and misery!" yelled Sora at the weapon. "Ever since I became the keyblade master Im always put in the choice to save myself and my friends or worlds." Sora dropped to his knees an began to cry. " I just miss all my friends and I wish I could find happiness" "But True Happiness is not gained through personal triumphs and self-satisfaction. As the keyblade master you should continue to fight for the hearts of those you love, like me," said a girlish voice behind him. Sora recognized the vioce and asked, "Kairi?" So what will happen after this? Youll have to respond to this and tell me what you think. You can love it or hate it but I put alot of time and researched and played the game over 5 times to get the dialogue and details right. So uhhh thats it. Bye __________________

04-2-2004, 10:19 PM	#3
Feuergeist FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Salem, Oregon Posts: 869	WTF GROSS __________________ Wer noch nie einen Fehler gemacht hat, hat sich noch nie an etwas Neuem versucht. Albert Einstein (1879 - 1955)

04-2-2004, 10:20 PM	#4
Chromer Hookers and Blow Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: You heard the robot. No fun. Age: 34 Posts: 4,981	Like I said You either Love it or Hate it. It doesnt matter to me Im still going to finish this online though. Yeah his shoes are a little big though. lol __________________

04-2-2004, 10:30 PM	#6
Moogy 嗚呼 Join Date: Aug 2003 Age: 34 Posts: 10,303	NO __________________ Plz visit my blog ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

04-2-2004, 10:35 PM	#7
eHarry FFR Player Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Cheltenham [Philly], PA Posts: 22	You can't judge a game like that..... it may look "kiddy" but in quality wise it is a great game. People say things like this all the time about games, such as Pop 'n music, without realising what the game is actually like, not how it looks. __________________ paz\|和平\|paix\|السّلام\|frieden\|강화\|pace\|平和\|peace\|םולש\|

04-2-2004, 10:13 PM	#2
Anticrombie0909 FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 4,683	If you liked Kingdom Hearts enough to write a fanfic over it, you'll probably hate me for saying this, but Kingdom Hearts is the lamest and most...hell, I'll say it, kiddy game I've ever seen. Bit hard to look tough when a dude with overlage shoes wielding a giant key is being backed up by Disney characters. Also, for disturbing and homoerotic Harry Potter fanfiction, please click here: http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1470482

04-2-2004, 10:37 PM	#8
ananana FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Atlanta Age: 36 Posts: 632	Kingdom Hearts was awesome! Chromer, it sounds good!

04-2-2004, 10:39 PM	#9
Moogy 嗚呼 Join Date: Aug 2003 Age: 34 Posts: 10,303	Kingdom Hearts was an awesome game, but fanfiction of any form is unbelievably lame. __________________ Plz visit my blog ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

04-2-2004, 10:42 PM	#10
Anticrombie0909 FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 4,683	Hello, discrimination! I figured I'd get a lot of venom for posting that, but it's true. The game had a chance to be somewhat enjoyable, if they didn't have to inject disney into every nuance of it. I never liked Disney movies past the age of 7 anyway, so why would I want to play a game about one? There is nothing fun about fighting with Daffy. There is nothing exciting about collecting puppies. If I wanted to do that, I'd go volunteer at Kid's Club.

04-2-2004, 10:44 PM	#11
Moogy 嗚呼 Join Date: Aug 2003 Age: 34 Posts: 10,303	Daffy is from Loony Tunes, dipshit. __________________ Plz visit my blog ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

04-3-2004, 12:14 PM	#14
VxDx FFR Player Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 1,871	You forgot the part where arch is a bisexual.

04-3-2004, 12:22 PM	#15
Lupin_the_3rd FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 2,665	I'm sorry, but I'm with Anticrombie on this one. Oh no! look out or i will smite thee with a key!!

04-3-2004, 12:34 PM	#16
ananana FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Atlanta Age: 36 Posts: 632	That key is very sharp now...

04-3-2004, 01:04 PM	#17
Omeganitros auauauau Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Hee-Haw! Age: 35 Posts: 8,897	A) It's a very big key B) The key is made of something metallic, and something that big made of something metallic = It would hurt if you got a beating with it. C) It's magic. And whether it be Disney magic or Magic: The Gathering magic, magic still owns. Thus: The key owns.

04-3-2004, 08:25 PM	#18
Lupin_the_3rd FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 2,665	A) Let's say they make an oversized muffler a weapon B)A key=a large piece of metal A muffler=a large piece of metal C) Mufflers are magical...mufflers allow cars to run better, and cars are cool. Therefore: Mufflers Own. Think about how much cooler it would be to smash somebody with a muffler. You could even have the little dude say corny lines like: Man, that was exhausting!

04-3-2004, 11:07 PM	#19
COBOL FFR Player Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: In a YAM Posts: 232	KH is dumb cuz its got gay disney characters in it. __________________ Cornstalk Remanants

04-4-2004, 08:48 PM	#20
Cyborg_Mermaid FFR Player Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Forum lurking like the crazy I am Posts: 294	I thought Kingdom Hearts would suck 'cause as an anime fan I have a hate for Disney. Square + Disney= EBIL! However I still played it and found it to be very good, in a way it's more strategically involved than most mainstream RPGs around. Also the story was a hell lot more "grown up" in the end. As for the story, I like it a lot it just needs a bit more description in the dialogue so your audience can better understand the scene. ....Shut up, I'm an English student. --; __________________ Guess who's back!

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