Flasion - Page 3

Tokzic · 12-18-2005, 03:09 PM

I'm not in it.

It fails.

msbrunnettemickey · 12-18-2005, 03:51 PM

It's awesome. =)

I wanna be in it =(

Lightknight924 · 12-18-2005, 04:50 PM

Maybe i'll write a prequel or sequel.

sente3 · 12-18-2005, 05:31 PM

I like that i die and come back, thats pretty cool. i like the chapter alot. The whole story is great. A sequel and/or prequel would be cool.

Lightknight924 · 12-18-2005, 07:42 PM

Thus ends this epic tale of betrayal. I may be writing a prequel or sequel and I made a topic in the Garbage Bin where you get to vote if I should either write a prequel, sequel, or none. If you post please vote. don't just post and not vote.

Also, take the thread in the garbage bin seriously because if I had put it in Chit Chat I would have been banned for it.

-Thanks, LK

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MrGiggles · 12-18-2005, 10:40 PM

It's cool, but....

I dunno, it's one of those things that's hard to place your finger on. Maybe it's your writing style, it seemed a bit odd to me. I think that if you wait for a year, then rewrite it, it would be awesome.

Nice story though.
Hey wait, I'm not in it. =P

Grandiagod · 12-19-2005, 12:36 AM

Cool ending, I don't care to much for fantasy, but this was interesting.

12-18-2005, 03:09 PM	#41
Tokzic FFR Player Join Date: May 2005 Location: TGB Age: 34 Posts: 6,878	RE: Re: RE: Re: RE: Flasion I'm not in it. It fails. __________________ ~very popular guitar streamer~ Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

12-18-2005, 03:51 PM	#42
msbrunnettemickey FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: BOOBALOOBA! Posts: 1,780	It's awesome. =) I wanna be in it =( __________________ בקצה השמיים, ובסוף המדבר, יש מקום רחוק מלא פרחי בר מקום קטן, עלוב ומשוגע, מקום רחוק מקום לדאגה יש אומרים שם שמשיקרה וחושבים אל כל מה שקרה אלוהים שם יושב ורואה ושומר אל כל משברא אסור לקטוף את פרחי הגן אסור לקטוף את פרחי הגן ודואג ודואג נורא

12-18-2005, 05:31 PM	#44
sente3 a brew Join Date: Feb 2005 Age: 33 Posts: 703	I like that i die and come back, thats pretty cool. i like the chapter alot. The whole story is great. A sequel and/or prequel would be cool. __________________

12-18-2005, 10:40 PM	#46
MrGiggles Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Skaia Age: 21 Posts: 2,846	It's cool, but.... I dunno, it's one of those things that's hard to place your finger on. Maybe it's your writing style, it seemed a bit odd to me. I think that if you wait for a year, then rewrite it, it would be awesome. Nice story though. Hey wait, I'm not in it. =P __________________

12-19-2005, 12:36 AM	#47
Grandiagod FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Feaefaw Age: 35 Posts: 6,122	Cool ending, I don't care to much for fantasy, but this was interesting. __________________ He who angers you conquers you. ~Elizabeth Kenny

12-18-2005, 04:50 PM	#43
Lightknight924 FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: New York Age: 31 Posts: 1,164	Maybe i'll write a prequel or sequel.

12-18-2005, 07:42 PM	#45
Lightknight924 FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: New York Age: 31 Posts: 1,164	Thus ends this epic tale of betrayal. I may be writing a prequel or sequel and I made a topic in the Garbage Bin where you get to vote if I should either write a prequel, sequel, or none. If you post please vote. don't just post and not vote. Also, take the thread in the garbage bin seriously because if I had put it in Chit Chat I would have been banned for it. -Thanks, LK The End

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