Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

[dood gone krazee]

Originally Posted by bluguerrilla

Don't kid yourself, no one wants to play that file.

I find it quite fun, and its a pretty good scoring file. We'll see. ;D

I'm actually kinda close to finishing it, I just have to step another section and clean it up a bit. I'll be done with it by Sunday because that's when I'll have free time... so if that doesn't answer your question, no, I don't really want to collab on it

[PhaeL v2]

ok then.

[kommisar[os]]

1st revious (red fraction difficulty judgin)


accept the fact: wow fix the sync on this. yns. auto reject.


badinerie: even for an easy file, this doesn't deliver anything more than 16th pianer notes. files need to be more difficult for this pack. reject.


liquid requiem: well structured file. beginning kinda drags on a bit, and there's one quad at the start that doesn't really fit (i don't hear any grenades going off ) and the part with the orchestral choir or whatev the dual freezes should at least be reduced to 32nd freezes. atm it looks too cluttered to read. accep with fixes.


mahoro de mambo: i keep thinking of all those waps rocking out to this song in concert. either fix the 12th time freezes or take out all the mods. you know better than that. file reminds me of happy question for some reason lmao. its fun as ****, nice MA file. accep if you fix da fucen 12th freezes (SM 3.9 DOES NOT SUPPORT)


steel floor that's in da fucen way: technically correct, but nothing really stands out from this file. song is weird and unexciting. song choice reject.

[N.T.M.]

What the ****? Who's stepping my song?

G'luck with the sync. Took me 12 hours do get the cut perfect.

[Mollocephalus]

hey gundam can i join ya guys on the judging panel

(this is necros btw)

[bender5]

wtf is rebirth doing involving himself in stepmania again haha

[The5thMoon]

Someone should post Rebirth's reviews in here for him.

[N.T.M.]

Originally Posted by The5thMoon

Someone should post Rebirth's reviews in here for him.

Here ya go:

Originally Posted by Rebirth

Accept the Fact: fix the sync during the first two bpm changes. thats bad rofl. Also when you have your doubles during the 16th streams, doubles going to the snare hits, you have them all on yellow notes. They're all a 16th before that (blue note). Also I'm a little sick of warmen songs from Xoon 4 but I can overlook my bias if this turns out good

Badinirie: the 90 bpm parts are off but thats something I can change if we accepted this. The chart you have isn't bad and looks correct in terms of pitch relevancy but layering with the background piano sounds like it'd make the file twice as fun. maybe an oni chart?

Liquid Requiem: Consider changing up the patterns if there's a boring part in the music (the 8ths in the first 30 seconds). It helps people stay away from exiting while playing. imo the second half of the file would be a pretty cool xmod file. just a suggestion

gundamdude animu file: Its actually kinda fun. bpm changes are off in a couple spots but I can fix that if we decide to accept it. Or you can if you can find out where the errors are. I'll learn towards yes on this for now, since its early in the submissions phase and I don't know how the bulk of the submissions will be.

Kommisar DJ ShArPnEl stopmania file: The only way I would accept another sharpnel file for a pack was if it was as good as or better than BF2014, and for some parts, I think this is. Very skeptical about the length though. Is it possible to dumb down the length to around 2 minutes? Also I have ideas to make this file better if it goes anywhere

Pre-Parade: not bad. not very high replay value

razor blade scars in the earth: I think if you tried editing this a little with your improved from 2007 simfile knowledge you could make this better. I still remember I kinda have some ideas for the file too but I'm lazy :<. I imagine a beyond the earth (toph's) style chart with this file. Maybe I can show you sometime after I finish my files for the pack. Out of the 3 you submitted, this is most likely to be accepted

Steel Floor That ******s sleep on while white people get beds: There's a pretty obvious yellow note to a drum beat after red notes that are missed. So obvious that they should probably be included. I kinda liked this. Contemplating replay value issue

[rajdaddy]

Originally Posted by WTFBrandon

I'm making one file and one only.
It will be in the pack.
That is all.
The song is called Entombment of A Machine, i'm sure some of you know...
Since i'm making one file im doing the full song, cry me a ****ing river, i don't give a ****.

Old Job For A Cowboy <3!

Ill love you forever if you actually get it in this pack.
If not you should send it to me anyway.

[GG_Guro]

Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

(Guro) Liquid Requiem

yoyoyoyoyo thats gg_guro my nig

Originally Posted by 'kommisar[os

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liquid requiem: well structured file. beginning kinda drags on a bit, and there's one quad at the start that doesn't really fit (i don't hear any grenades going off ) and the part with the orchestral choir or whatev the dual freezes should at least be reduced to 32nd freezes. atm it looks too cluttered to read. accep with fixes.

my nig quads dont need to be justified by the loudness of a sound alone ya herd? if ya listen carefully my nig you'll hear the quad goes to da kick and 3 note chord for da organ my nig. as for da freeze i think ya played the wrong version my nig bcuz i fixed dat before sendin


[quote-Rebirth]Liquid Requiem: Consider changing up the patterns if there's a boring part in the music (the 8ths in the first 30 seconds). It helps people stay away from exiting while playing. imo the second half of the file would be a pretty cool xmod file. just a suggestion[/quote]

i guess some of that **** gets a bit dull my nig so i'll see what i can does for dat. i'll also think about da xmads

[moches]

(pokelda) Liquid Requiem - sup ***** this file is sorta cool ***** but Kommisar basically says everything you need to hear. ***** fix this up
(Kommisar) Scar in the Earth - automatically awesome bye. this is released though N/A
(Kommisar) Papaver Rhoeas - not one of your best. not ver fun sorry Kommi nope
(Kommisar) Pre-Parade -
(Bluearrowll) Accept the Fact - NTM/10
(Bluearrowll) Badinerie -
(SulferDragon) Steel Floor That Obstructs the Path - friggin' love this file sorry every other judge. needs snare hits instead of mines though in that one part Rebirth mentioned, I actually hit one out of instinct and got a boom thanks. accept tho
(Gundam-Dude) Mahoro de Mambo - if both of you guys liked it I don't need to play it autoaccept
(Rebirth) WHITEBLUE- dunno about this. feels sort of inconsistent at times. fun though. maybe

there's your incomplete reviews

also wtf the5thmoon's banner is INSTANT love why weren't Balloon Park's graphics as good as those =)

[kommisar[os]]

dont play my sharpnel file fool.


scar in the earth is released by nobody has it so ye

[Gundam-Dude]

Originally Posted by Mollocephalus

hey gundam can i join ya guys on the judging panel

(this is necros btw)

talk to rebirth and kommi about it since their leading the pack.

would be even better if you can help out with graphics sets too

[The5thMoon]

Originally Posted by moches

also wtf the5thmoon's banner is INSTANT love why weren't Balloon Park's graphics as good as those =)

Lol, well I wanted to put the level as the background and banner for those, so that's probably why.

[Gundam-Dude]

(Bluearrowll) Accept the Fact
Yellow Note Syndrome. NTM's file is infinitely better than this. Rejected

(Bluearrowll) Badinerie
Can be layered more by following the background piano. File is far too easy for me to pass this. Mine usage was decent. Rejected

(Linus) Dengeki Tube
Most of the file is underlayered and indexable. Didn't really like the Mine usage. 32nd bursts are gay as ****. Rejected

(Ca25nada) End Time
Completely avoided layering in piano chords with jumps/hands. Jumpstream is rather fun and song choice is nice. Rejected. If you fix this up, I might actually reconsider because this might have some replay value to it.

(GG Guro) Liquid Requiem
Quads don't quite fit with what you're layering. Basically look at Kommi's notes and I might lightly accept this. Rejected

(Kommisar) Papaver Rhoeas
Generic Sharpnel file. Rejected

(Kommisar) Pre-Parade
Wasn't this a collab between you and Nick for Otaku's Dream? Either way, stepped accurately but I found it to be boring and generic with no replay value. It belongs in OD, not here. Rejected

(Kommisar) Scar in the Earth
I noticed this has less steps than the FFRCP file ?__? But yeah as mentioned, this file doesn't look or feel like your present day files, haha. If you can fix it up, then I'll accept for sure. But for now I'll put this down as Maybe/Pending

(Bynary Fission) Sing, Sing, Sing (With a Swing)
Measure 104 with the 24th jumpjack is dumb. Hands feel a bit too intense for the song. Mini freezes would work better. Very nice swing file. Only complaint is that it drags on and gets repetitive. Maybe/Pending until I hear from other judges.

(SulferDragon) Steel Floor That Obstructs the Path
Pretty much exactly what Moches and Rebirth already mentioned about the mines and drum/snare. Kinda agree with Kommi with this one, didn't really find much replay value or fun factor in this. Fix those errors and I'll pass this so for now it's Rejected

(Bluearrowll) Tera Gets Sand in his Monitor
Sync is off in a lot of sections of the file. Didn't really like your stop usage, even when I ran through it with xmod. Also way too short of a file so don't expect me to pass this. Rejected

(Rebirth) White Blue
Gonna have to agree with Moches on this. Some parts are a bit inconsistent which definitely irks me. Disliked some of your hand usage and applications. Maybe/Pending until I hear from Kommi.

[Dr Tran]

rofl gundam is so harsh

[Gundam-Dude]

who would've thought I'd be stricter than Rebirth

[Dr Tran]

pokelda is gg_guru

[WTFBrandon]

I loved ballon parks graphics.
And the song, and the file.

[SKG_Scintill]

Where's your Pichu avatar? I miss it