Old 05-11-2012, 05:27 PM   #1
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So I mean... I made this two months ago but I need some critique on it for when I make my next song. This is really my second attempt at making music. So yeah, one question:

If you could change / improve / takeaway one thing - what would it be. Thanks <3



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Old 05-11-2012, 05:38 PM   #2
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Extremely nice job for your first song! You've got potential haha

The only thing i'm not a huge fan of is that WUBWUB scratches of a sorts at like 2:15 and 2:17, but you did pretty well with balance throughout the whole song haha. You're a natural!
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Extremely nice job for your first song! You've got potential haha

The only thing i'm not a huge fan of is that WUBWUB scratches of a sorts at like 2:15 and 2:17, but you did pretty well with balance throughout the whole song haha. You're a natural!

Thanks

And yeah, I struggle with matching dubstep related material into what im doing. Thanks for your feedback!
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Posted my thoughts on your SC Waveform Great to hear new musicians, keep it up!
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I love your input!! Thanks man that really helps
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