[johnnyboy898]

Originally Posted by ilikexd

m1 the 48th trill is significantly harder than anything else in the file, consider making it a roll or something. it is really short though so w/e.
m8-m16 i wouldn't use holds for both the lead and bg guitar at the same time
m11 don't understand why these are jumps, see in m15 the same sound is just single notes
m25 vocal 12ths aren't correct. it's just 1 note
m28 16th vocal should be a 12th
m29 the 12th triplet should be a 16th triplet at the 2nd half of the beat
m32 not really a good reason for it to be a quad, especially a quadhold

i would consider stepping the snare as jumps in a lot of places like m16-29 for example

otherwise it's pretty good in general. i'm not a fan of spamming miniholds but that's subjective.

thanks for the input! i went over the file again and made some changes. here's the revised version: http://www.mediafire.com/?n2xkeyaerko2nxa