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Default Re: Batch Review Thread

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8/19/08

THE QUEUE
{Big Boss} by V4N
Across Rooftops by jx
Black Key Etude by behan
Blue-Violet by Silvuh
Brandish Headless by Shash
Counter Clockwise Chant Pattern by gnr
Destined Marionette by behan
Document 13b by blu
Empornium by dore - jumps on hihat, maybe.  song is pretty mello though...  extra jumps might ruin it.  ps - 2nd parental advisory song on FFR
Feldschlacht by behan
Kanon-Kanon by bmah
Lost in Mind by Silvuh - file is nothing special though
Momentary Life by Shash
moon child - go with the flow- by bmah - takes me back to Reach and 2003.
Phantom Ensemble by behan
Summer Time Perfume by bmah - i like the current layering.  then again, i am not a huge fan of overlayering files.  if you want to layer it more, likely would require a re-submit.


Files Played By Tass But Not Queue'd
Fighting for Control - fix PR.  remove hands, file isn't FMO.
Game Boy Fiend - consistency in layering.  underlayered is OK, but be consistent.
Hero in a Dream - check sync. fix missing 16ths.  neat song, IMO...  bad vocals.
Moonlight River - fix up PR
Rose At Nightfall
Ska De Chocobo!! - jumps/layering


Shash
3020 (Coolboyrulez0) [-]
-64ths are completely retarded sorry
-Rest of file is boring and generic, some parts are kind of ok but PR is missing and jumps could be used a lot better

Across Rooftops (jimerax) [+]
-Maybe some bits are a little overlayered, in the hardest parts it's kinda hard to tell what things are going to
-Overall very fun though, the slightly easier layered parts where I could really tell what was going on were excellent.

Black Key Etude (behanjc) [+]
-Nice PR
-Fun little piano file

Blue-Violet (Silvuh) [+]
-Ok PR, fun file overall
-Personally I try to avoid using the 3241 type of 32nd burst pattern since it often feels really weird to hit, maybe make it 4321 or 1234 instead?
-I would suggest more minijacks for PR and consistency, since you only have one bit with them and they're fun there IMO.

Brandish Headless (Shashakiro) [+]
-Own file. 4/5 + so far, holy **** this is probably a record

Calmness (Mr. Nothing) [?]
-If you're going to do this you need PR, period, and this has none. Fix it.

Chaoz Fantasy (Netjet!) [?]
-WTF layering and jacks. No, no, no, no, no. This file should have no jacks at all and about half the jumps.
-There is potential buried beneath the awful layering here, PR of non-stupid parts could be better but first things first get rid of the ridiculous overlayering.

Chaoz Japan (eastsideman09 and EnR) [+?]
-In places like m7-8 that pattern stinks, make it more fun like 1 (12) (34) or something
-For 12th jacks in m29-36 make the jacks switch hands please, switching from jacking on 2 to jacking on 1 is insanely awkward
-Fun aside from that.  64ths are kinda nasty but accurate and not too bad.

Chocolate Rain DJS Remix (Xandertrax) [-]
-Quit out after intro.
-No. Just...no.

Chocolate Raid DJS Remix (DarkZtar) [?]
-In contrast to Xander's, the intro is massively understepped. Do more than just put one jump please.
-Needs to be more layered and PR throughout. Ignoring the very prominent 'o o-o o-o' noise throughout until like the end is pretty damn bad.

Church Bells (-Barista-) [-]
-Jacks and 32nds used horribly throughout. Not even a little bit fun.
-Needs to be completely redone.

Church Bells (HighAndr0id and Classic_rocker) [+?]
-Some of the yellow jumps midstream didn't seem to go to anything audible, and file seemed overjumped in general.
-I dunno about the jumpjack + megatrill, it's accurate but pretty silly. Probably higher chance of getting file accepted if you just make it jumptrill + rolls

Counter Clockwise Chant Pattern (gnr61) [+]
-Insanely hard file for FFR but seemed accurate and well-stepped overall
-May need toning down of super hard parts to actually get in, and I'm not 100% sure of super technical accuracy but it's fine for me.

Crowdpleaser [Drop the Mic Mix] [+.]
-Kind of generic but decent I guess.
-m6-9 should prolly have layered 8th jacks
-Minijack part doesn't seem very accurate

Data Drain [Xandertrax] [-]
-Just don't step this, seriously. Your file will either be inconsistent or stupid no matter what you do (in your case, inconsistent). It's a funny SM song but has no place in FFR.

Death of a Dynasty (Vote4Nixon) [+?]
-Patterns in general are fairly weak. Use more PR.
-Hands were not used well and were almost entirely unnecessary.
-Rhythms and sync were good.

Decisive Battle (DarkZtar) [-]
-WAY overstepped, sorry 8th jumps to the melody is terrible.
-The good thing about this file is the song is amazing, so I will step it for the next batch hehe

Destined Marionette (behanjc) [+.]
-PR in various places seemed a tad off, like the beginning
-Very fun overall

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [?]
-Way overlayered, tone down the massive layered 32nd wall parts
-Parts that were not overlayered with 32nds were fun

Document 13b (FFR Remix) (bluguerrilla) [+]
-Jumps to the "echoes" in the quieter parts don't work that well and seem unnecessary, the echoes don't seem pronounced enough to me to warrant jumps
-Very fun overall, jacks are used quite well

Drop (Operationstrawbarry) [+?]
-16ths such as in m30 are actually 24ths
-PR needs work throughout
-Jumpspam doesn't seem like the optimal pattern for the beginning, try different combinations of jumps + taps
-Overall rhythms are quite fun, potential for a very good file here if it's fixed up.

Empornium (dore) [+.]
-LOL
-LOL
-oh man tass needs to play this hahahaha

Endless Dream v2 (s0ulst0n3) [-]
-Inconsistency with jumpstream and non-jumpstream
-Jumpstream patterns are meh
-m46 has no 24ths in the music
-auto-rejection for holds

Ezuora (DJAirWave) [-]
-wtf random stream with random jumps, quit out.
-steps don't match music, sorry.

Falling Phase (badman7772) [?]
-Needs a good bit of PR work throughout
-NEVER use a jack as part of a descending runningman pattern.  The repeated arrow should be preserved for only the repeating pitch, plus it's awkward as hell to play.
-File is incredibly generic as is now and really needs perfect/near perfect PR to get + from me, rhythms are correct though so good job there.

Far East Allnight (Coolboyrulez0) [?]
-Lots of places where PR fix is needed
-m27 does not have 12ths
-Layering would help this file a lot since it's very very generic right now.

Feldschlacht (behanjc) [+.]
-Layering seems inconsistent in many areas, even within measures/sections
-Overall extremely fun though.

Fighting for Control (kommisar[os]) [+?]
-Needs PR work in parts with just 8ths and jumps
-Other parts are pretty fun.

Fire Aura (kjwkjw) [?]
-Nothing changes in the music in m13 to warrant jump use change
-Above is just one example of inconsistency throughout file, also needs much PR work.
-Some misrhythms in a few places.

Flames of the Sky II (b-a-e-r and fluuk) [-]
-HORRIBLE patterns throughout, like jacks in beginning and random trill and roll patterns
-Terrible song choice, file is incredibly boring and generic and pretty much not salvageable
-Eventually I quit out because this song is also WAY too long.  Almost 4000 arrows of this nonsense?  Please.

Freedom (Mr. Nothing) [+?]
-There are no 16th gallops in this song, those are all either 8ths or nonexistent
-Not bad overall for an easy file, PR is all right and rhythms are ok except for the above.

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon) [+.]
-Wtf MAMA stream near beginning lol, I know what you're doing but it feels way too weird and consistency with m33 jumpstream isn't that important IMO.
-Decent in general, could be much better if layering was added well and maybe slightly better PR.

Halloweenies (Flaming_Dingleberry) [+?]
-m27 is inconsistent with the rest of that section
-m38 jumpstream is completely BS, rhythm is actually ta ta-ta-ta ta-ta-ta ta-ta-ta etc
-Minijacks used very well, overall it's pretty decent but fix the above.

Hardcore Bass (cyrx900) [+]
-Song is quite long, maybe use a cut?
-PR used very well, good file overall even if the song is kind of irritating.

Heaven Road 2 (Ng mix) (kjwkjw) [?]
-PR throughout needs a lot of work
-First 16ths in m35 should be 24ths and there's another part like that later
-12121 as 32nds is a horrible pattern, make it 2-handed please
-I would suggest more layering throughout.

Hero in a Dream (SulferDragon) [+.]
-No real suggestions, idk...just an ok file, song isn't that interesting so it's pretty good given that.

Higan Retour ~idling mix~ (Knoobish) [-]
-Before m29, it was actually pretty damn good
-Then I quit out for retarded 64th wall and overlayered jumpstream after it.  Fixplz.  This actually has potential based on the first 28 measures but holy crap it gets bad after that.

I Don't Hate the 80's (bluguerrilla) [+?]
-Why no pitch change in m5/m9 jack?
-m12 trill probably starts too early
-m70 is an incredibly awkward pattern
-Throughout, (12) and (34) jumpjacks don't have 16th's, while (13) and (24) do.  I'd reverse these.
-Big 32nd roll pattern should probably be 1234 or 4321, other pattern types are meh

I Wake Up Clueless (Ground_Breaker) [-]
-Auto-rejection for hands in file that is not hard

Inside the Fire (dore) [+]
-Great PR, great sync and rhythms, no problems for me.

K8107 v2 (t-rogdor) [-]
-This file is basically exagon's with some hands
-Completely unnecessary

Kanon-Kanon (bmah) [+.]
-Decent PR and rhythms
-Chains and parts with that jump-tap rhythm could probably be layered better.

Kusharu Shrine (Skeleton-GotW) [+]
-Small PR error throughout, you have 32132123 (or the equivalent shifted to the right) in many places, and 32132132 is correct.  M1 is an example.
-Otherwise well-stepped and fun.

Loot Burn Rape Kill (Not Available) [+.]
-More layering and PR would help this a lot
-Pretty fun though.

Lost in Mind (Silvuh) [+]
-small PR errors: m38, and many of the 16ths in the section starting with m75, just two notes reversed a lot.
-Good file overall, but I would really love to see that flute or whatever the slow woodwind instrument is layered in, I think it would make the file really great if done well.

Lullaby (customstuff) [-]
-Waaaaaaaaaaay overstepped
-Song choice isn't good, this song doesn't seem like it could make a good stepfile really.

Lunatic Moon OC Remix (Knoobish) [?]
-Copymirror on slow bit = bad
-Overall fairly boring--could really use more layering in the faster bits, and then PR on the slow part.

Meow! (customstuff) [?]
-Jump placement in the jack sections seems completely random
-Trills and runningmen in the stream need to go away, stream patterns aren't great in general
-1-hand trill is random and unnecessary.

Momentary Life (Shashakiro) [+]
Own file, although I plan to change a couple little things and then resubmit.

moon_child –Go with the Flow- (bmah) [+]
-Not 100% sure if minijack rhythms are right, see what other judges say.
-OK PR, nice file overall.

Moonlight River (Silvuh) [+?]
-PR with jumpspam parts is overall not very good
-In the bits where you have an 8th runningman, you reverse the pitches of the red notes
-Good PR otherwise.

Nightfall (Azafreak) [?]
-Many misrhythms like gallops, remove minijacks, fix stream patterns
-File is extremely generic, not a very good song choice for stepping.

Pacsyndrome (bmah) [+.]
-Small misrhythms in various places, like missing red notes in m66 which feel awkward
-Good file overall.

Phantom Ensemble (behanjc) [+]
-Jump use seemed a little erratic throughout
-Good file overall.

Psychopotamia (Ledwix) [+?]
-Some PR could be better, especially in streams
-Layering of jumps midstream is ok, but finish with a jump too.  For example, first blue note of m14 should be a (14) jump.
-Nice rhythms.

ReMotion Remixed (Xandertrax) [?]
-Needs more PR, for runningmen parts especially
-The part with yellow jumps stinks.  The yellow beat doesn't get any stronger there.  When the music seems to get 'stronger' then the previous section but with a similar beat, try actually analyzing what changes and having your steps reflect that.
-m73-81 doesn't have gallops.

Rose at Nightfall (SulferDragon) [+.]
-I don't really hear the 12ths that are layered in, other judges can confirm them or not
-Some small PR issues, like for example the 16ths in m1 would be better as (14)23 and 423.
-Otherwise pretty good file

Sidology Episode 3 (Apex Ultima) (Zap_Track) [?]
-24ths don't really seem correct in the part with zillions of them
-Needs a lot of PR and layering work in general for such a long file.  Also seemed like there were quite a few misrhythms.

Ska De Chocobo!! (behanjc) [+?]
-I didn't really get the layering you were using if that was the idea, so the jump placement seemed kinda erratic throughout…I would just go with jumps to the melody honestly, except for 16ths which could be sandwiches.
-Why did you not step the last few notes of the song?  That seemed weird.

Space Pirate (Vote4Nixon) [-]
-File is stepped incredibly inconsistently, entire thing is basically one huge misrhythm, and hands are used very poorly
-Auto-rejection for hands in non FMO

Spark's Theme (Skeleton-GotW) [+?]
-Layering around m10-20 and m40-50 is done poorly, fix those parts to make the main melody more prominent
-Otherwise well-stepped.

Strangeprogram [Long] (s0ulst0n3) [-]
-Auto-rejection for holds
-From what I did play this is too similar to the ingame one and not necessary.

Summer Time Perfume (bmah) [+.]
-Nothing really wrong with this file IMO, but I think it could be a lot more fun if more layering was done, especially in the beginning parts.
-Still fun without that though.

Tension Up System (r3v0lut10nm4st3r11) [-]
-Auto-rejection for completely wrong snap (this song is 16ths based) and holds.

The Dream (Serverkiller) [-]
-Offsync and wrong BPM bye

Titan –The Superjail Mix- [+?]
-Syncing for part with words is COMPLETELY off
-It's…ok aside from that, although it seems like better layering/jump use is possible.

Velaciela (bmah and HammyMcSquirrel) [+?]
-Needs better PR and layering for me, too boring as it is now.
-Song cut is really bad, ends incredibly abruptly.

Vertex ALPHA (tj28) [!]
-Auto-rejection for multiple difficulties
-Tass already basically said he will never put this song into the game as it's almost the same as BETA.

Violent Storm (thechild) [?]
-Beginning seems to be misrhythmed
-File is pretty boring, needs more layering or something to make it more interesting, also some of the yellow 'jacks' aren't PR as jacks.

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [?]
-Needs massive PR fix.
-More layering might also help in parts
-16th stream seems completely wrong.

Yoshi's Castle (HammyMcSquirrel) [+?]
-Again, basically needs total PR overhaul.
-Seems ok aside from that.

{Big Boss} (Silvuh) [?]
-Badly overlayered 12th jack part, inconsistencies throughout
-The other one is way better

{Big Boss} (Vote4Nixon) [+]
-Much better than Silvuh's
-Very well-stepped, great file.
Note: Due to a pure bias based on the respective quality of files produced by Silvuh and V4N (and the stepping style of each of them as well), I kind of suspect that they were somehow reversed…no offense to either if this turns out to be false.

{Evolution} Out Stage (rushyrulz) [?]
-12th snap is wrong, it's 16ths for most of the file
-Some parts are fun, but for the most part layering is very bad and inconsistent.

{Paranorma} v2 (CosmicRain) [-]
-Bad misrhythms, terrible use of jacks, no PR in easy bits.

{Spacefall} (iluswirl) [-]
-Godawful stream patterns and minijacks in stream and random 16th pauses and stuff.  Learn how to make fun stream patterns.

{Spacefall} (Orange Dude) [-]
-Horrible stream patterns, also has misrhythms and such.  Similar in quality to iluswirl's.  Random 16th stream for years is not the way to step this song.

{The Sewers} (CosmicRain) [-]
-24ths wtf.  No, no, hell no.  Quit out after the third set because I could see where this was going.
-Overstepped like hell with 24ths and then understepped elsewhere.  Awful overall.


JX
{Big Boss} (Silvuh) [+? / 5.5]
missing jumps on m1/m5, 24th on m7 isn't needed. 
misrhythms on m10/14/42 (actually 48th + 64th, and need better pattern/modification)
some jumps on the yellow note/jack placement are weird.

{Big Boss} (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4.5]
felt some parts lack layering (beginning, m16, m24, etc).
misrhythms on m10/14/42 (actually 48th + 64th, and need better pattern/modification)
also missing notes on some parts.

{Evolution} Out Stage (rushyrulz) [- / 1]
BPM error (offsync, and make the main rhythm 8th or 16th) 
file's full of misrhythms, needs layering

{Paranorma} v2 (CosmicRain) [- / 1.5]
many rhythm errors, 64ths are 48ths, some are 32nds, 64th trills are stupid. PR could be better, gap off

{Spacefall} (iluswirl) [- / 1]
felt jump placement is random, quite inconsistent structure

{Spacefall} (Orange Dude) [? / 2]
PR could be better, some misrhythms, m18- stream doesn't fit the music well

{The Sewers} (CosmicRain) [- / 0]
offsync, 24ths/32nds/etc are completely out of place

3020 (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 2.5]
misrhythm on m8/16/etc, a bit inconsistent layering. also felt repetitive

Across Rooftops (JX) [own file] (12)

Black Key Etude (behanjc) [+ / 7.5] (11)
ok sync(a bit off esp in m23-32, ending), great PR, jumps could be put more on some parts for layering

Blue-Violet (Silvuh) [+. / 6.5] (9)
piano parts are improved a bit but felt layering for drums is still inconsistent at parts.

Brandish Headless (Shashakiro) [+. / 7] (11)
unnecessary jumps in m10/14, unnecessary notes in m14, PR on m16/17, m64-67 could be better, 
hands aren't needed IMO, want 48ths in m61, last two 32nds are 24ths in m62

Calmness (Mr.Nothing) [- / 1.5]
too short, jumps in m8, PR could be better

Chaoz Fantasy - (Netjet!) [? / 2]
PR could be better, jump/jack placement isn't good

Chaoz Japan [eastsideman09 and EnR] [+? / 6]
downjacks/minor rhythm error at beginning, minijacks around m57 don't fit the music
m46-53 could be better in terms of consistency. IMO 16th note after the 64th burst could be removed.
otherwise, sync is fine.

Chocolate Rain (DJS Remix) (Xandertrax) [0 / -]
withdrawal

Chocolate Rain DJS remix (DarkZtar) [? / 4]
beginning should be stepped more/offsync at parts.
after that, felt the layering styile is generic/inconsistentat parts

Church Bell (-Barista-) [- / 1]
a lot of errors in jack placement(PR)/rhythms in general
also PR in guitar part could be better

Church Bells (HighAndr0id & ClAsSiC_rOcKeR) [+? / 5.5]
PR could be better overall, especially in solo part. hands should be placed more carefully
m47 is 24/16ths

Counter Clockwise Chant Pattern (gnr61) [+. / 6.5] (12)
funny/weird song, hard file.
rhythms in m19/46, also some other minor rhythm errors but ok (lol @ bursts with all colors).
they all could be counter clockwise spins.

Crowdpleaser [Drop the Mic Mix]  DarkZtar [? / 4.5]
BPM error (don't use stops for syncing)
layering for hihats at the beginning, inconsistent in parts like m31.
also minijacks don't fit the music well. some 24ths are 32nds.

Data Drain (Xandertrax) [? / 3.5]
rhythms in m17-25, m34, m47-52, layering is inconsistent, especialy in parts like m68-
felt inconsistent when steps switch from double based style to single
sync error, after m159 notes get earlier to the music.

Death of a Dynasty (Vote4Nixon) [? / 3.5]
need better layering sytle/more consistency between guitars/drums overall
also, PR (guitar) could be better

Deceisive Battle   DarkZtar [? / 4]
many misrhythms, m27-28, m33-34, m42, m54, etc are 12ths.
the style of jumps on melody + random 8ths isn't too fun for me

Destined Marionette (behanjc) [+. / 6.5] (9)
want 16ths for drums on parts m48, m54, m65, m67, m69, etc

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+? / 5.5]
on m35-43, m53-, m80, most jumps aren't needed (or put more carefully), sone 32nd pattern could be more roll based, 
m95- many 32nds are out of place. got better than the last one though

Document 13b (FFR Remix) (bluguerrilla) [+. / 7] (11)
burst rhythms/jump in m24? didn't get some jump placement but ok

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [? / 3.5]
inconsistent layering(double placement), some 24ths could be used

Empornium [dore] [+? / 5.5]
adding jumps on handclap in hihat section would be better, layering method is a bit boring for me.

Endless Dream - s0ulst0n3 [? / 2.5]
pretty inconsistent layering, not good hand placement, 24ths?

Ezuora (DJAirWave) [- / 1]
streams don't fit the music, random pattern/jumps. quit out

Falling Phase (badman7772) [? / 2]
need some layering and berrer PR not to be boring

Far East Allnight (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 3.5]
many misrhythms(12ths, synth melody, etc), repetitive at parts

Feldschlacht (behanjc) [+. / 6.5] (10)
some parts are cool but felt layering is inconsistent/weird at parts for me, technically not wrong though
32nd on m91/99? some 16ths for piano on m27/96/102/etc are 24ths (shift up-arrows by 48th)
triplet jack in m106 isn't needed

Fighting for Control (Kommisar[os]) [+. / 7] (10)
PR for jumps could be better maybe

Fire Aura (kjwkjw) [? / 2.5]
notes on silence/misrhythms, jump placement is quite inconsistent

flames of the sky II (b-a-e-r & fluuk) [? / 2.5]
quite random patterns, inconsistent, felt way too long (6+ minutes)

Freedom (Mr.Nothing) [? / 3]
misrhythms (16ths?), PR could be better

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon) [+? / 5.5]
a bit inconsistent/underlayered at parts, could add some 32nds notes for drums

Halloweenies (Flaming_Dingleberry) [? / 3.5]
bpm late, beginning should be stepped more, jump placement could be better overall, could use 32nds more

Hardcore Bass (cyrx900) [+? / 5.5]
meh sync, songcut

Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix) (kjwkjw) [? / 3.5]
PR/layering could be better. could add some 32nds on synths for fun (m39, etc).
especially blue note parts, they are ones of the ways to step but not fun.

Hero in a Dream (SulferDragon) [+. / 6.5] (10)
on parts like m18 snares could be layered maybe
missing 16th on m99, 109, missing jumps on m40, 98

Higan Retour -idling mix- (Knoobish) [- / 1]
64ths are crap (and not even technically correct)
PR could be better, and noticed a few errors in rhythm/jump placement

I Hate the 80's (bluguerrilla) [+? / 5.5]
PR error in m5/m9, jumps are put BDs consistently but weren't too fun for me, burst pattern in m16
weird 16th placement on m19/25/etc for drums? or they are put on hardly audible things
other synth parts are fine I guess.

I Wake Up Clueless (Ground_Breaker) [? / 5]
ending should be cut, hands are overused

Inside the Fire [dore] [+? / 6]
it has decent PR and the style is ok for this difficulty, but still long and it's getting boring for me.

k8107 - T-rogdor [? / 2]
sync errors, v1 is better

Kanon-Kanon (bmah) [+. / 6.5] (10)

Kusharu Shrine (Skeleton-GotW) [? / 4.5]
didn't like the music, some jumps are inconsistent (around triplets), missing some 16ths (m18, 22, 25, 26, etc)

Loot Burn Rape Kill Repeat (Not Available) [- / 1]
offsync overall, random jump placement/misrhythms

Lost in Mind (Silvuh) [+? / 5.5]
inconsistent layering (especially m26-), rhythms on m72

Lullaby (customstuff) [- / 1.5]
pretty awkward hand usage (especially quads)/patterns overall  

Lunatic Moon OC Remix (Knoobish) [? / 3.5]
seems some rhythms are wrong/missing some 32nds, inconsistent double placement

Meow! (customstuff) [? / 4.5]
inconsistent jumps, 3 arrow jack would be better than 4 arrow jack 
want some climax

Momentary Life (Shashakiro) [+ / 7.5] (11)
m6/30/177- could have some more jumps, missing hand on m68/132, jumps for snare on m81-83?
tiny things, though.

moon_child -Go with the flow- (bmah) [+. / 6.5] (9)
decent PR, m33-49 could be layered more/better, missing 32nd on m106 

Moonlight River (Silvuh) [+. / 6] (7)
PR is ok at parts but could be better (m13-, m54, etc)
layering is mostly correct, a bit boring imo but maybe ok for an easy file

Nigthfall (Azafreak) [? / 2]
complete error in m9? and random rhythms/many rhythm errors after that, need more layering

Pacsyndrome (bmah) [+? / 5.5]
steps aren't erroneous but felt missing a lot of background drum/synth rhythms for fun factors

Phantom Ensemble (cut) (behanjc) [+ / 8] (10)
felt a few parts are underlayered but fun/technical file anyway

Psychopotamia (ledwix) [? / 5]
after m13 need 32nds for piano, missing note on m33
in parts like m48-, some base rhythms should be 16ths
PR could be better at parts

ReMotion Remixed (Xandertrax) [? / 5]
jumps for marinba could be more PR after m9, after m82 some jumps are missed
overall, quite inconsistent layering even though the song is repetitive trance

Rose At Nightfall (SulferDragon) [+? / 5.5]
want a 16th note before blue 8th jump on patterns like m15
also, you layer strings as 12ths but the layering way is inconsistent IMO
after m45 felt 4th part is understepped

Sidology Episode 3 (Apex Ultima) (Zap_Track) [? / 4.5]
could follow the background drums more for better layering, need songcut, PR could be better

Ska De Chocobo!! (behanjc) [+. / 6.5]
felt jump placement is inconsistent at parts, misrhythms on m80-82

Space Pirate (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4.5]
didn't see any good reasons for hands on most parts
missing notes on m28, 36, 53, 65, etc

Spark's Theme (Skeleton-GotW) [+? / 5.5]
mostly ok but PR could be better at parts, could layer drums more on some parts

Strangeprogram[Long] {s0ulst0n3} [- / 1]
just similar to v1, no need for sull version, random patterns

Summer Time Perfume (bmah) [+. / 6.5] (9)
m9-15 is underlayered (on purpose?), felt a bit long/repetitive

Tension Up System (r3v0lut10nm4st3r11) [- / 0]
freezes, BPM should be 165

The Dream (Serverkiller) [- / 0]
totally offsync, quit out. and this is matathon

Titan -The Superjail Mix- (Zap_Track) [? / 3.5]
voice part isn't done well, imo you should cut the song before that.
also jump placement is inconsistent overall

Velaciela (bmah & HammyMcSquirrel) [+? / 5.5]
missing notes on m63(32nds), m65(piano), m27/71/78
m42- example of bad layering change

Vertex Alpha (tj28) [- / 0]
multi difficulty, played one of them randomly and wasn't queueworthy at all

Violent Storm (thechild) [? / 3]
rhythms of beginning aren't correct(also not very audible), PR/layering could be better overall

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [? / 4]
multi difficulty, also felt melody, chords, drums are randomly layered (edit).

Yoshi's Castle (HammyMcSquirrel) [? / 4.5]
small misrhythms on beginning, PR with melody/pizzicato could be better
m35- could be layered.


Blu
3020 (Coolboyrulez0) [?] - totally misunderstood what I meant about the 64ths, piano section needs better PR, trills should change first in red notes not blue notes

Across Rooftops (JX) [+] - m19 maybe missed a note, m35 missed another, m55+59 32nds should be a 2134 spin, m68 not sure what 3rd orange note goes to, m73 missed two hands?, m85 24ths not 32nds, m91 missed rhythm in second half of measure, ending jumps could have a couple hands in it and better PR (+ bc i'm being really nitpicky here)

Black Key Etude (behanjc) [+] - really fun piano, liked the layering choice at end

Blue-Violet (Silvuh) [+] - could have more jacks to piano in there but otherwise good

Brandish Headless (Shashakiro) [+] - ignored bass drum in intro on purpose?, m75 two 4321's should be 1212's,

Calmness (Mr.Nothing) [+?] - some PR issues in the doubles, is this a cut?

Chaoz Fantasy (Netjet!) [-] - PR in intro, jacks in JS, missed doubles in JS, weird double placement, inconsistent

Chaoz Japan (eastsideman09 and EnR) [+?] - PR issues in m46+ jump section, pretty good otherwise

Chocolate Rain DJS remix (DarkZtar) [+?] - some inconsistencies double PR,

Church Bell (-Barista-) [-] - major PR issues, many missed rhythms and misrhythms, ending bpm change

Church Bells (HighAndr0id & ClAsSiC_rOcKeR) [+?] - PR in guitar solo could be better, PR to piano could also be better, overall pretty good

Counter Clockwise Chant Pattern (gnr61) [+] - some jacks caused by layering or choice in jumps that could be avoided but it doesn't really matter at this bpm

Crowdpleaser [Drop the Mic Mix] (DarkZtar) [?] - missed rhythms, should be no stops to sync (bpm+gap error), better pattern choices for 32nds, vocals need better manual sync

Data Drain (Xandertrax) [?] - many missed and misrhythms, a cut would be nice, ending could be more fun

Death of a Dynasty (Vote4Nixon) [?] - sync needs to be much better, some missed rhythms in guitar and drums, m47+ stream goes to guitar?, m77 or so rhythms go to what?,

Decisive Battle (DarkZtar) [?] - overstepped, the high pitched guitar parts especially, m51 missed a yellow after the 24ths, go over every section that has 16ths and make sure they actually go to something, sections like m81 should be 12ths not 16ths,

Destined Marionette (behanjc) [+.] - some weird layering and possibly missed doubles

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+] - muchly improved

Document 13b (FFR Remix) (bluguerrilla) [#] even more awesome than before

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [+?] - the 16ths that you put to sticks are actually 24ths, if this is confusing I can show you what I mean

Empornium (dore) [+] - ell oh ell oh ell oh ell

Endless Dream (s0ulst0n3) [-] - holds, PR in doubles bad, ending stream goes to nothing, hand usage bad

Ezuora (DJAirWave) [?] - random yellow jumps?, m51-66 misrhythmed, free form stream lasts for too long, would be more fun if you stepped the secondary rhythmic synth

Falling Phase (badman7772) [?] - PR needs a lot of work (the doubles that go to drums are fine), some missed rhythms in the 8th notes

Far East Allnight (Coolboyrulez0) [?] - misrhythms in intro synth, PR in patterns could be a lot better, sync to guitar could be better, random 12ths/24ths/etc go to nothing?,

Feldschlacht (behanjc) [+] - good balance in layering different instruments, good flow

Fighting for Control (Kommisar[os]) [+.] - some of the stream in the first JS section could be better PR, other than that good

Fire Aura (kjwkjw) [?] - some of the triples go to nothing, random minijack, some PR issues in the jumps,

flames of the sky II (b-a-e-r & fluuk) [-] - bad stream patterns, bad PR in doubles section, overdoubled, OMG LONG

Freedom (Mr.Nothing) [?] - jacks for no reason and misrhythms, needs better PR in 8th stream

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon) [+] - interesting layering scheme, couple misrhythms like in m85 first red note,

Halloweenies (Flaming_Dingleberry) [?] - inconsistent double usage, inconsistent jack usage, ignored some 32nds that could be fun

Hardcore Bass (cyrx900) [-] - long boring breaks, inconsistent difficulty, bad sync, very very long

Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix) (kjwkjw) [?] - some 16ths go to nothing, missed rhythms throughout, weird double placement

Hero in a Dream (SulferDragon) [+?] - sync needs to be better, missed 16ths m34 to bass drum, other than that fine

Higan Retour -idling mix- (Knoobish) [-] - missed drum rhythms, lol 64ths dumb, permission?, weird cut, mixed hand jacks,

I Hate the 80's (bluguerrilla) [#] own file, kind of lol

I Wake Up Clueless (Ground_Breaker) [?] hands not FMO, 48ths wrong (actually 128ths but 64ths would work), manual sync needs to be better,

Inside the Fire (dore) [+?] - solo very hard compared to the rest of the file, 16th stream after solo could be harder (JS or just lots more jumps),

k8107 (T-rogdor) [-] - same as v1 but much worse

Kanon-Kanon (bmah) [+] - not overdoubled anymore

Kusharu Shrine (Skeleton-GotW) [?] - missed yellow notes throughout, weird double placement, inconsistent jack usage

Loot Burn Rape Kill Repeat (Not Available) [?] - bpm way off, many missed rhythms, better layering choices

Lost in Mind (Silvuh) [+] - fun and easy, as usual atypical layering but it's good

Lullaby (customstuff) [-] - overlayered and incorrectly layered at parts, hands in non-FMO

Lunatic Moon OC Remix (Knoobish) [+?] - some rhythms feel wrong because they're not dominant, (13)(24) jumptrills aren't as fun as the others, some PR issues in slowdown part,

Meow! (customstuff) [?] - 12th jacks are a little much compared to the rest of the file, long trills in stream made no sense, end of trill to bass drum made no sense,

Momentary Life (Shashakiro) [+] - rly fun

moon_child -Go with the flow- (bmah) [+] - weird song with a fun file

Moonlight River (Silvuh) [+] - fun and easy

Nigthfall (Azafreak) [?] - minijacks for no good reason, pattern choice for 32nds should be better, double placement mistakes, rhythm errors,

Pacsyndrome (bmah) [+] - much better

Phantom Ensemble (cut) (behanjc) [+] - lots of fun and very accurate, fun drums

Psychopotamia (ledwix) [+?] - doubles need better PR, could use a step after the last note to hold the piano

ReMotion Remixed (Xandertrax) [+.] - good layering, could use better PR in the gallops

Rose At Nightfall (SulferDragon) [+] - not much to say

Sidology Episode 3 ( Apex Ultima) (Zap_Track) [?] - many misrhythms and missed rhythms, too much wrong to list it all, seems like you gave up halfway through, good effort though

Ska De Chocobo!! (behanjc) [+.] - layering scheme makes play awkward, sometimes seems incorrect with jumptrills,

Space Pirate (Vote4Nixon) [?] - overlayered with hands, non-FMO, rhythms to noise may be ok, jacks may be ok at this bpm but feel out of place

Spark's Theme (Skeleton-GotW) [+.] - minor PR errors throughout

Strangeprogram[Long] (s0ulst0n3) [-] - holds, loljacks, dump stream, a lot wrong with this file, like v1 but really bad, quit out

Summer Time Perfume (bmah) [+] - lots of fun but could be harder, lots of room to put jacks and more layering but really fun how it is

Tension Up System (r3v0lut10nm4st3r11) [-] - holds, expand 2->3, minijacks for no reason, layering could be better

The Dream (Serverkiller) [- -] - everything is wrong, quit out

Titan -The Superjail Mix- (Zap_Track) [?] - manual sync needs to be way better, many missed rhythms, weird double placement, maybe cut some of the middle boring stuff,

Velaciela (bmah & HammyMcSquirrel) [+?] - minijack at m20 no good, m43 missed rhythms, missed rhythms around m80 (drums),

Vertex Alpha (tj28) [-] - multiple difficulties, BNS, dumpstream, quit out

Violent Storm (thechild) [?] - intro off sync, PR needs to be much better in gallops etc, m42 on misrhythmed,

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [+.] - multiple charts, ok file but flow could be better

Yoshi's Castle (HammyMcSquirrel) [?] - weird double placement, intro offsync, missed rhythms, needs PR, very weird cut

{Big Boss} (Silvuh) [?] - many misrhythms, seemingly inconsistent jack usage, weird double placement, mixed 12ths and 16ths very awkward

{Big Boss} (Vote4Nixon) [+.] - m19-20 missed drum rhythms (like a total of 3 arrows), a couple PR errors in 12th section (two bass drum hits in a row stepped as gallop should be jack), very minor fixes

{Evolution} Out Stage (rushyrulz) [-] - wrong bpm, quit out

{Paranorma} v2 (CosmicRain) [-] - weird jack usage, missed rhythms, misrhythms, bad double placement, misrhythms, misrhythms, misrhythms

{Spacefall} (iluswirl) [-] - jacks for no reason, weird double placement, overdoubled, bad stream patterns, weird cut, lots wrong

{Spacefall} (Orange Dude) [?] - misrhythms, stream for no reason, could be a lot better, bad pattern choices for snare (123432),

{The Sewers} (CosmicRain) [-] - 24ths/32nds go to nothing (actually they go to the smearing sound but it really doesn't work), crazy 32nd jacks, misrhythms out the wazoo
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