[m0de]

im usually the "nice guy" around these parts.. but this is bad, and you should feel bad. i would rather dip my balls in honey and hover them over a red ant hill than to ever hear such butchered crap.

go back to the drawing board, and practice a bit more. dont throw this kinda stuff out there and tell people to subscribe. as Fission said, if people like your stuff, they will sub you. instead try making a thread asking for advice/criticism.