[Hazelle]

It seems a bit random - why did she announce this to a burger joint? It seems like she was just eating her fries and decided to tell everyone of her past. There's a little bit of work with basic sentence structure and grammar, but overall I was intrigued. Poor thing about the dog though =( Even though it sucked, I'm really glad you included that. Makes the story a little more...mm...I dunno the word, but it's really great