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Old 10-16-2019, 08:35 PM   #8
Ghost_Medley
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Default Re: 2019 September/October Set 1

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Originally Posted by bmah View Post
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rating: 9/10
- 0.00-18.35s,291.22-305.06s: combining the bass and treble melodies into a single homogeneous layer feels really weird. I'd do proper layering on both melodies, and when notes intersect, do a jump.
- 73.39s: I think the trill is pushing it for the nebulous nature of the guitar lol. I'd keep this as a single arrow to be honest.
- ghost arrow at 143.64s, but jump at 143.88s
- 233.84-251.54s: similar to my first comment, I recommend layering the strings in with the piano instead of combining them into a single layer.
- Summary: Impressive syncing job, and a wonderful chart to go along with it. Lots of variety in both the music and steps too. I just wish the piano solo sections were layered a bit more fully, would love if you could do this.
I did changes for almost all of these aside from your mention of a "ghost arrow," the arrow is layered up with the guitar like the other 16th note before it. I did however add the jump.
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