11-29-2019, 08:23 PM
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#30
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FFR Simfile Author
Join Date: Aug 2018
Age: 22
Posts: 13
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Re: 2019 September/October Set 5
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- rarely do I have the opportunity to say this on a chart that’s generally well done, but I’ve got no earthly idea what you’re doing with these BPM changes
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lol oops; fixed
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- some triples early on in the song are misplaced or missing (27.916 should be a triple instead of 28.040, 29.156 seems like it should be a triple given your earlier structure, same with 29.900, 31.883 should be a triple instead of 32.007, etc); check all instances to ensure things are consistent
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starting from 33.867 - I do try and stay consistent with it, but they begin to be situational here because of the additional layering I have; hopefully this isn't terribly off
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- 46.263: given that there are running 8ths in this section, you’re missing out on accenting the consecutive kicks that occur here. Accent with jumps or, if you don’t want to increase the layering, two-note mini-jacks can be used as well.
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weird way of me accenting it: the jumps are stacked with one note ( it goes LD, LU, UR, RD, so each of the jumps are stacked one another )
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- 47.503: move this L to a D to capture the background vocal sampling (you do this a bit later as well)
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more anchors yas
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- 49.734 to 1:05.106: with the exception of that last mini-jack, this section is excellent. Another thing I can point out: 1:01.511 actually has two repeating notes, so the 8th can be moved to the R to create a pitch-relevant accurate minijack.
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sure, created the minijack there
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- 1:31.387: there’s actually a pitch bend here with discernible notes, might be worth accenting (also, the note at 1:31.593 is a bit too early)
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accented with 24ths
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- 1:33.370: this note can be bumped down a 16th
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sure, but still think there should be a note at 1:33.370 because there's an audible pitch + end of a sequence so placed a D there
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- 1:52.771: sequence for the kicks changes here, this should be a jump and the jump currently on 1:52.833 shouldn’t be there anymore
- 1:57.296: missing jump
- 2:00.829: ^
- 2:13.039: this should just be straight 12ths from here, no rogue 16th and no gaps, just a 7-note sequence
- 2:43.226: missing note
- 2:49.982: misplaced jump, move down 1/32nd
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all rearranged to fix these suggestions
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- this is a great chart overall
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<3
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