Flash Flash Revolution - View Single Post

lord_carbo · 05-14-2009, 06:26 PM

You're posting this for a general audience, so you're implicitly assuming it's at least presentable. But it's not. And by being a little insulting in my critiques I'm venting my frustration at my time wasted. I think it's a fair trade-off.

If you'd listen to us then maybe you'd be a decent writer. Really, this is a bad poem. It's really really bad.

05-14-2009, 06:26 PM	#12
lord_carbo FFR Player Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: fighting villains from afar, NJ Age: 32 Posts: 6,222	Re: "Angel" My first love poem You're posting this for a general audience, so you're implicitly assuming it's at least presentable. But it's not. And by being a little insulting in my critiques I'm venting my frustration at my time wasted. I think it's a fair trade-off. If you'd listen to us then maybe you'd be a decent writer. Really, this is a bad poem. It's really really bad. __________________ last.fm Last edited by lord_carbo; 05-14-2009 at 06:28 PM..