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Originally Posted by bmah
Let's Live in the Lovely Cemetery [Alternative Ver.] / Buta-san
rating: 9.5/10
- 2.95s: Single arrow.
- 12.54s: Could be a quick gallop.
- 23.65s: Percussion PR.
- 63.37s: Single 8th or jump to cymbal crash would be nice.
- 88.86s: Missing 16th to guitar.
- 108.37-108.51s: These could be just jumps instead of hands.
- Summary: Fun file with very few flaws, but the flow of the guitar solo is what really stood out to me. Great work.
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Fixed above thank you.
Curious to know what you think about the layering for the beginning/ending around the solo.
Any better solution, or is there not much that can be done?
This 1+1 precussion/kick + melodic note thing sometimes feel off or hard to follow when the two dont snap.
Edit: thickened layer lightly in beginning heavily in ending.
Besides that heres stuff I fixed/changed but unsure about. Will revert or fix if demanded.
Don't really have to go through these, just wrote it down as a reference incase it helps.
Edit: I kinda got carried away and theres more changes than whats mentioned here.
Arrow Vortex
- 12.25s Missed jump: melody + precussion
- 18.37s 24th burst following glissando
- 25.45s Converted jump > dissonance
- 32.60s Ghost note: 16th
- 34.20s Missed note? Added, Sounds extremely high ptiched
- 37.12s Here onwards changed a good chunk of the whole solo
- 43.92s 24ths burst here? Added
- 50.97s Missed 32nd note. Not sure if its really worth adding? It might even be a burst of 48ths.
- 50.73s 24ths burst here? Added
- 66.98s 24ths burst here? Added
- 68.09s Added slide guitar
- 69.90s Bunch of changes in this measure
- 72.40s Missed jump: lead guitar + precussion
- 72.95s converted jump > Hand
- 73.09s Ghost note? Removed
- 83.50s Missed jump: lead guitar + kick
- 89.20s Changed a bunch in the measure starting here
- 97.40s Missed jump: lead guitar + kick
- 106.28s Missed jump: lead guitar + precussion
- 106.63s Missed note? 16th gallop