[psychoangel691]

Judge:TC_Halogen

Chronomia (DarkZtar) [6.5/10]
Song Artist: Lime -- Perms: OK

- 12.743 to 21.201: jump patterning can better follow the piano pitch with some minor tweaks
- 20.760: I can understand having a 12th note minijack when using a triple to accent for the brass, but there’s a bit of space to clean up the bursts a bit
- 24.373: ^
- 25.232/26.241/(etc): missing note for the same thing you’re following in the following 16ths - there are a bunch of these
- 41.289 to 46.575: jump usage in this section starts as exclusively percussion but seems to change to something that’s not the most discernible, take a look at it again and make sure you’re accenting what it is that you want to
- 42.478: starts as 24ths, until 42.611
- 43.536: not hearing any 24ths here
- 55.562: remove triple
- 1:00.452: pretty abrasive pattern for something that’s barely audible
- 1:06.663: should be 48ths
- 1:11.950 to 1:37.924: verify your jump usage and make sure you’re accounting for the things you intend on accenting, as there are noticeable inconsistencies (accented w/o melody: 1:12.214, 1:16.443, 1:20.672 - missing at various places; unnecessary jumps: 1:14.461, 1:18.690; etc) -- overall, I feel like the jump usage is too heavy and doesn’t have enough focus
- 1:18.293: missing jump
- 1:30.056: missing jump for kick here; this appears to be the only instance that is missing where you have 24ths for the hi-hat blips so it doesn’t really violate a rule more than once that you’ve established
- 1:32.434: missing jump for guitar
- 1:44.659: not quite right, but it works since there’s not much else going on
- 1:52.522: you accommodate for the swing in the percussion earlier on, you should do it here as well
- 2:12.743: a bunch of missing percussion here
- structure is alright, but needs a bit more clarity at times
- a few minor rhythm checks can also be done

Exam Cram (ilikexd) [8/10]
Song Artist: Rushjet1 -- Perms: OK

- 57.892: not a big fan of changing the layering in the middle of a musical phrase like this; that being said - even with that change, this first jump is unnecessary
- 1:04.270 to 1:17.026: I understand the jump placement, but I imagine most aren’t going to think that the change in key merits those abrupt jump accents
- 24th patterning gets a little nasty in the first half of the final stream, but I do appreciate that you’re able to maintain that arpeggiated style patterning
- chart could take a bit more effort into making deviated pitch relevance to not repeat the same exac patterning structure as the opening
- good chart overall


kiss the sexy robot ultimate championship 201X!!! (VisD) [8.5/10]
Song Artist: nitro -- Perms: OK (CC-BY-NC)

- the only qualm that I really have with this file in general is the occasional lack of agreement in jump representation between kicks and snares, where some instances the same jump is used for both percussive elements (11.475/12.075, 15.875/16.274)
- jump pitch relevance for melody can be improved at times as well (18.875/19.275, 24.275/24.675, 28.175/28.475, etc.)
- 55.875: nice balance!
- 1:35.974: ghost note
- 1:52.174: missing note here
- 1:52.724: not quite hearing this 32nd at any speed
- 2:01.774: missing note for bass
- this song and file slap, good shit.

looming shadow of a tree long gone (EzExZeRo7497) [9.5/10]
Song Artist: goreshit -- Perms: OK

- very literally nothing to point out; layering is crystal clear, patterns are very well structured, all percussion is accommodated for
- chart is exceptionally regimented, misses nothing and does a good job providing a solid challenge without any surprises - excellent work!

Railing (ositzxz369) [8/10]
Song Artist: Nvoise -- Perms: OK

- 20.350: because this snare buzz actually gets cut off, it would look better chart-wise if this last 32nd was removed (making it only a three note burst)
- 25.850: ghost note
- 34.696/35.157/(etc): pretty noticeable missing notes for the drum breaks as well
- 27.157 to 46.850: there are a lot of noticeable missing notes for various parts of the drum breaks, mostly hi-hats (you accent 27.696, 28.927, 29.081 but miss 29.234/29,542, etc) and occasional cymbal rides that come an 8th after a cymbal crash (34.696, 35.157, etc)
- 35.465: this is actually a pretty nasty burst given the sound(s) you’re following; additionally, 35.504 is a ghost note
- 48.388: another instance of a short buzz that has two very distinct separations, so having it as all one blip is a bit off visually
- 49.157: should be 24ths instead
- 52.350: remove 32nd
- 1:27.119: same deal with the short buzzes
- 1:28.234: trill is not quite right here, there’s some finer sequencing here that is a bit more complex than simple alternating
- very interesting ending
- solid chart; good enough as is but could use some tiny bits of cleanup here or there
- imo, your best file to date