04-2-2009, 01:18 AM
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FFR Player
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: VA
Age: 33
Posts: 2,033
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Re: A poetic scribbling from my vacation.
Great to get some feedback. There are certainly some good thoughts in your critique, and I am taking them to heart.
I do doubt, though, that I'll omit the contractions, given that I speak with contractions regularly.
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