04-30-2009, 12:23 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Auburn NH
Age: 34
Posts: 1,691
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Re: Some Original Stories!!!!
yeah i agree it was very detailed it just jumped a little too fast sometimes- this could easily be like 3 chapters worth if you worked at it- great work though
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As life gets longer, awful feels softer and it feels pretty soft to me. And if it takes **** to make bliss well I feel pretty blissfully. If life's not beautiful without the pain, well I'd rather never even ever see beauty again. As life gets longer, awful feels softer, and it feels pretty soft to me.
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