[Matthia]

Originally Posted by bmah

Rave 4 / Matthia
rating: *7.5/10
- 14.43s: Emphasized enough to warrant a hand?

nope (Changed it to a jump)

*- 24.45s: Ghost 16th.

Mentioned in discord already, I can hear the 16th sound on 1.0x rate

- 49.75-49.97s,etc.: I don't think it's worth stepping very quiet 16th percussions here. If you do decide to leave this in however, then you'll have to address at least the inconsistency of a missing 16th preceding these patterns (e.g. 49.68s), and possibly other 16ths as well going to those same quiet percussions (e.g. 50.42s,51.31s). If it becomes too busy by addressing these inconsistencies, then I recommend sticking with my original recommendation.

I wanted to leave the notes in for 49.75-49.97s, etc., otherwise it'd result in sudden, short breaks that doesn't correlate to a song that constantly throws percussion/break/etc. sounds. I added some 16ths (and slightly adjusted surrounding notes to keep the patterning comfortable) to satisfy consistency (49.68s, 52.05s, etc.)

I didn't want to add the 16ths in 50.42s, 51.31s, etc. because the more relevant sounds of these sections make them inaudible on 1.0x rate. Same idea with placing a 16th at 56.87s between the jumps on 56.72s-56.95s, etc.

- 64.59-64.81s,88.33-88.56s,etc.: [14] jacks are pretty awkward, though they wouldn't feel out of place for a file of this difficulty. However, the same pattern persists throughout the song, so I strongly recommend changing up this pattern at least a few times.

Changed up three (out of five total) of these patterns

- 78.32s,78.46s: Not sure why these 16ths are jumps.

Fixed

- 107.89s,113.83s,141.13s: Sound's pitch doesn't really suggest a jack here. Similar case with 115.16s, except this minijack doesn't relate so much to pitch, but just feels unnecessary.

Fixed

*- 123.55-123.74s: Please no. Just because Counter Clockwise Chant Pattern does this fast white staircase pattern doesn't mean you should - please adjust this pattern.

Alright XD.

Made it into a similar roll-ish pattern like 124.73-125.62s

*- 154.11-155.30s: Jumpjacks embedded within this section are reasonable but the overall execution is poor because of very awkward transitions mainly pertaining to the left hand. Rearrange the patterns a bit here.

Changed, transitions should be significantly less awkward

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One more thing to add is that 66.07s I changed up the orange note pattern for the A-A-A-A-AHH-AHH to 21213_3_ (previously 12343_3_)
That's all~