[icontrolyourworld]

nice !!
try mine it goes like this starting as 4th notes:
dooo dooo dooo dooo, dooo dooo dooo dooo, dooo dooo dooo dooo, dooo dooo dooo dooo
and then it repeats that except the last to dooo dooo's are the same note but still played separately

and then it throws in the kick it's like
boo
boo tshh
boo
boo tshh - tshh - tshh

then it gets this synthy thing that goes like as 16ths
bu du ba da
bu du ba de
ba da be da
da ba be dooo

and then it has like an ambient like airplane sound like you're flying for a few seconds but 3 times
and then it's like
ba-da-ba-da-de-bo-do-de-da-da-bu-be etc. for the rest of the song
it's not cornandbeans goodluck o.o