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Old 06-23-2009, 10:10 PM   #9
Midnighter
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Default Re: All poetry here :)

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Originally Posted by sp1nzoK View Post
Blind World (villanelle style poem)

Something I had always thought;
Why are people blind to see?
All alone had battles fought.

Dimmest light from the sun sought,
for just another fool's fee.
Something I had always thought.

Only ill fate themselves brought,
surely they would all agree.
All alone had battles fought.

Another dawn brings the drought.
Who can still water the tree?
Something I had always thought.

Again some extra time bought,
the weakest wanting to flee.
All alone had battles fought.

Only bravest people ought
to open their eyes all free.
Something I had always thought,
All alone had battles fought.
I'm kind of confused dude. Could you explain it a bit? Thanks.
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