06-23-2009, 10:10 PM
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FFR Player
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Suwannee, GA
Age: 31
Posts: 49
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Re: All poetry here :)
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Originally Posted by sp1nzoK
Blind World (villanelle style poem)
Something I had always thought;
Why are people blind to see?
All alone had battles fought.
Dimmest light from the sun sought,
for just another fool's fee.
Something I had always thought.
Only ill fate themselves brought,
surely they would all agree.
All alone had battles fought.
Another dawn brings the drought.
Who can still water the tree?
Something I had always thought.
Again some extra time bought,
the weakest wanting to flee.
All alone had battles fought.
Only bravest people ought
to open their eyes all free.
Something I had always thought,
All alone had battles fought.
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I'm kind of confused dude. Could you explain it a bit? Thanks.
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