[imajrockette]

what? and plus wth is your problem though.jeez.im only 14 i hope your not expecting me to be some fuxkin poetry genius or something.

while your complaing let me see you do bettter and then you can talk all the shxt you want but until then try to back up your arguements more better.

actuality it is a poem...i cant please everyone and i will always have critcs at that so i really could care less what you think about my poetry.if you dont like it then dont complain and go read something else.

also verruckter i really appreciate your help with the critics to.my poetry will never be perfect for others but i have quite a few that actually liked it to some extent so w/e