04-10-2008, 04:18 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Canada, with the cool people!
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Re: im your puppet no longer
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Originally Posted by chardish
I really think you should find another place to use "soon" in your last verse. It's just such a dynamic and strong word.
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You forgot the murder curse.
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