[Nullifidian]

@ Quigly, the proportions look really flat. Especially near the chin, it looks like it's a flat mask instead of an actual chin shape.

@ Carlos, to a lesser extent same deal. The shading doesn't really define the shapes of the face making the face and the hat look flat.
e: also yeah what quigly said, the nose etc should be in the direction the face is in, unless she's been boxing or something :')