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Old 06-28-2020, 02:06 PM   #140
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Default Re: Official Tournament 13 Batch Notes

I got my reply to the notes on Gamma Stop Giving Me Hard Bags written.

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Originally Posted by psychoangel691 View Post
- 7.971: next note is technically not the same, so repeated notes aren’t quite accurate, though the contour of the pattern is sensible given that the highest note does still fall on the R here, so -- thoughts
After some consideration I wanna keep this the same since I don't think any other pattern would fit the PR as well.

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- 15.471/16.012: surprised this isn’t a jump too? I understand a bit more for the second instance, I suppose
I made the first one a jump, but I didn't have the second as a [43][12] jumptrill because of sound variation.

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- 17.296: note feels like it should be removed
- 17.498: missing note
I kept the first one, but added the missing note.

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- 23.850/24.053: surprised to not see notes here, given 18.715/18.917 -- I know there’s a sidechain here but the sound pumps out pretty hard after ducking out from under the kicks and it feels a little weird to be empty
I can disagree on this one, for me it feels odd to have those notes with the pacing of the section around it.

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- 40.674: would add a jump here to keep the overall flow moving
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- 43.918/etc: if D/U for this, then 44.188/etc should be a different coupling (musically, the first couplet are two different notes but the second couplet are two of the same note)
- 50.269: flipping the U/R to R/U would give you more relevance to the bass here
Both were flipped, the second D/U to U/D and the U/R to R/U.

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- 50.674: synth should get an accent of some sort, no?
Does not feel significant enough playing through normally.

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- 1:05.742: missing note for kick
- 1:06.485: should likely be a note for the hi-hat here
- 1:12.296: missing jump for snare
- 1:16.013: cutoff crash could be worth accenting as a jump (you do it at 1:17.296)
- 1:20.607: missing note
- 1:24.121: ^
- 1:29.661/1:29.797: missing notes for kicks
- 1:31.553/1:31.689: ^
- 1:53.986/1:54.121: some more missing vocal samples here
All done, but omitted the one at 1:54.121.

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- 1:55.180 to 2:13.108: jump usage feels inconsistent in this section; all snares appear to be accommodated for but lyrics and kicks both occasionally get missed for reasons that don’t appear to be related to being the only instrument to land at the time
- 2:13.108 to 2:30.406: this second half of the section on the other hand is almost perfect in terms of jump representation; if there’s supposed to be some sort of progression, the structure isn’t clear in the first half
Cleaned up both halves so both follow the percussion precisely instead of a mix of percussion and vocal.

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- 2:56.835: timing on this is not quite right
Fixed.

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- 2:57.764/2:58.467/2:59.112: missing notes for percussion
- 3:05.088/3:05.557/3:06.494/etc: missing note(s) for melody, there are others
- 3:16.455/3:16.924: missing notes for percussion
- 3:28.174: missing note, according to 3:31.866
- 3:29.463: should be a jump, according to the sequence at 3:28.350
- 3:34.971/3:35.088/3:35.440: some more noticeable missing notes for the melody, there are plenty others
I filled in ALL the missing notes I could find, shifted some patterning to accommodate.

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- a LOT of small errors, and I mean a lot. Definitely more than what’s noted here.
I did look back through the file and tried to pinpoint notable bits that could be cleaned up. Definitely a weird experience when I'm charting something that's just outside of my skill range.
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