11-30-2009, 09:23 PM
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nah
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: nah
Age: 29
Posts: 3,506
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Re: My Poem I wrote in English Class.
Second stanza was pretty clever, made me chuckle.
The rest however, was pretty cliche. Not a bad idea for a poem though. Maybe give it some more creative metaphors and similes. Adding some imagery couldn't hurt either.
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