05-14-2009, 04:49 PM
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FFR Player
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Suwannee, GA
Age: 30
Posts: 49
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Re: "Angel" My first love poem
For those saying i used to many commas, thanks. I'll fix that i never use to think much about it but i will. For those who just rag on it, no thanks. Your opinion isn't wanted. Helpful none hurtful criticism is what i want. I don't care what you have to say if its rude or mean. I'm certainy not going to feel bed from random people on the internet. The girl i gave it to liked it (to bad she turned out to be a royal pain in the ***).
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